for Twisted Life12/4/2008 c13 
2Elle for Love to Write
KYLE what a schemer. how could a person do that
aww i can feel this tory coming to a close soon BUT will you tell us why travis doesnt like to be touched?
PLEASE
please update asap!
thanks
2Elle for Love to WriteKYLE what a schemer. how could a person do that
aww i can feel this tory coming to a close soon BUT will you tell us why travis doesnt like to be touched?
PLEASE
please update asap!
thanks
12/4/2008 c13 TheImpossibleGirl93
Yay! I'm so happy! *singsong* They've admitted to liking each other! Yay! Anyway, this was a great chapter. And now you've got me singing and dancing! I just loved the part where she touched his face and he turned into the touch, it was so cute seeing as he has touch issues. I loved it and please update ASAP!
~(the very happy) Malice
Yay! I'm so happy! *singsong* They've admitted to liking each other! Yay! Anyway, this was a great chapter. And now you've got me singing and dancing! I just loved the part where she touched his face and he turned into the touch, it was so cute seeing as he has touch issues. I loved it and please update ASAP!
~(the very happy) Malice
12/4/2008 c13 Over
D: wow...poor kyle no one wants him... IFEELBADFORHIM...victoria has an evil
plot huh? im kinda scared for veronica.
maybe victoria secretly liked kyle too!
hopefully then everybody gets a happy
ending:D
D: wow...poor kyle no one wants him... IFEELBADFORHIM...victoria has an evil
plot huh? im kinda scared for veronica.
maybe victoria secretly liked kyle too!
hopefully then everybody gets a happy
ending:D
12/4/2008 c13 11buzzgirl37
YAY! They're together-together. And evil Kyle showed his true colours and also showed he wasn't as much as a dummy as we first pegged him for. Although Travis was...idiot. He shoulda just come straight and tried to get her. But yay they admitted it. And he hardly flinched at all!
Oh no though...what's Victoria going to do...? I'm worried. Keep crazy girls gubby hands of him...Travis obviously thinks they're grubby :) While Veronica's aren't, at all.
Ooh do we get to find out why Travis doesn't like being touched soon..?
Is this nearly over? :(
Can't wait for the next chapter (Like the nex story...as you may be able to tell from the rambling review on that one...)
11buzzgirl37YAY! They're together-together. And evil Kyle showed his true colours and also showed he wasn't as much as a dummy as we first pegged him for. Although Travis was...idiot. He shoulda just come straight and tried to get her. But yay they admitted it. And he hardly flinched at all!
Oh no though...what's Victoria going to do...? I'm worried. Keep crazy girls gubby hands of him...Travis obviously thinks they're grubby :) While Veronica's aren't, at all.
Ooh do we get to find out why Travis doesn't like being touched soon..?
Is this nearly over? :(
Can't wait for the next chapter (Like the nex story...as you may be able to tell from the rambling review on that one...)
12/4/2008 c13 anne
woohoo - go trav! go trav! it's your birthday
woohoo - go trav! go trav! it's your birthday
12/2/2008 c12 angelblissjoy
hiya,
great story!
cant wait to know what Trent has to say
update again soon
take care
hiya,
great story!
cant wait to know what Trent has to say
update again soon
take care
12/2/2008 c12 hadeelohs
Hey!..i just read the entire story and even though I enjoy all of your stories on here I gotta say this is god! Oh and I really like Travis :D
Hey!..i just read the entire story and even though I enjoy all of your stories on here I gotta say this is god! Oh and I really like Travis :D
12/2/2008 c12 ohxrosie
Ah, gotta love the man-fight.
Ah, gotta love the man-fight.
12/2/2008 c12 10Aurora Corona
Whoa. Cliffhangers are evil, woman!
But seriously. What took you so long to update? I was literally jumping in my seat waiting for the next chapter.
And this was kinda short :(
Oh well. That doesn't beat the fact that the story is AHMAZING right now. :D
Can the next chapter be updated sooner? Or if not, could it at least be longer than this one? Cos I'm just dying of curiosity!
And what's Travis' secret? Very curious.
LOVES TO YOU&YOUR STORY (that's why you should update sooner! :D)
SP.
10Aurora CoronaWhoa. Cliffhangers are evil, woman!
But seriously. What took you so long to update? I was literally jumping in my seat waiting for the next chapter.
And this was kinda short :(
Oh well. That doesn't beat the fact that the story is AHMAZING right now. :D
Can the next chapter be updated sooner? Or if not, could it at least be longer than this one? Cos I'm just dying of curiosity!
And what's Travis' secret? Very curious.
LOVES TO YOU&YOUR STORY (that's why you should update sooner! :D)
SP.
12/1/2008 c12 3VampiressAJ
whoa, holy crap. thats awesome. but a question how did they get into the house? just walk in? they have some balls if they did. lol i fricken love it. update soon!
3VampiressAJwhoa, holy crap. thats awesome. but a question how did they get into the house? just walk in? they have some balls if they did. lol i fricken love it. update soon!
12/1/2008 c12 CATpuccino
Whoa what happened? You really successfully made this story twisted. lol. It doesn't as predictable as I thought. Dang, it's complicated. Love it though.
Whoa what happened? You really successfully made this story twisted. lol. It doesn't as predictable as I thought. Dang, it's complicated. Love it though.
12/1/2008 c12 Scorpiongurl324
OMG OMG OMG wat is going on? Update soon! That wasn't long enough and ended on cliff hanger, ur so mean! LOL!
-Kia
OMG OMG OMG wat is going on? Update soon! That wasn't long enough and ended on cliff hanger, ur so mean! LOL!
-Kia