for If This Were a Fairytale12/26/2008 c14 
4scattered-strings
Wow. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Her mother is such a mad cow.
4scattered-stringsWow. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Her mother is such a mad cow.
12/25/2008 c14 1MidorixGrl
aww, so interesting. what is camden up to?
i really like how you're tying the story btw (:
1MidorixGrlaww, so interesting. what is camden up to?
i really like how you're tying the story btw (:
12/25/2008 c12 2righthere431
just give up Elle! Camden likes Finley! and her dad could at least check on them so he could finally know what's going on!
p.s. Merry Christmas!
2righthere431just give up Elle! Camden likes Finley! and her dad could at least check on them so he could finally know what's going on!
p.s. Merry Christmas!
12/25/2008 c11 righthere431
lol what a way to rip one Toby... but you're still so awesome! and I'm so glad that Camden's friends like her!
lol what a way to rip one Toby... but you're still so awesome! and I'm so glad that Camden's friends like her!
12/25/2008 c5 Thu
Hey, I was just wondering that is Camden partially Vietnamese? Hmms, because I think you said that his father or mother is named Xuan, which is a Vietnamese name. Sorry, I'm just curious and sorry for my bad grammar. I love your story so far. I hope you keep on writing it.
Hey, I was just wondering that is Camden partially Vietnamese? Hmms, because I think you said that his father or mother is named Xuan, which is a Vietnamese name. Sorry, I'm just curious and sorry for my bad grammar. I love your story so far. I hope you keep on writing it.
12/25/2008 c12 FarFromGrace
I still can't get over how quickly you update!
I like Finley and Camden's new lunch table. And the introduction of her dad was a nice addition. Will you describe why she's with her mom if she's an alcoholic if her dad is still existent. Sorry, that's probably not a big deal.
I do have to give the evil step-sister credit though, she's one persistent woman.
I still can't get over how quickly you update!
I like Finley and Camden's new lunch table. And the introduction of her dad was a nice addition. Will you describe why she's with her mom if she's an alcoholic if her dad is still existent. Sorry, that's probably not a big deal.
I do have to give the evil step-sister credit though, she's one persistent woman.
12/25/2008 c12 19toffeecakesxox
Merry Christmas, Sammy! :) Have a Happy Holidays!
Awesome chapter! I love Mr. Carter so far - much better than his wife. :D
-toffeecakesxox.
19toffeecakesxoxMerry Christmas, Sammy! :) Have a Happy Holidays!
Awesome chapter! I love Mr. Carter so far - much better than his wife. :D
-toffeecakesxox.
12/25/2008 c11 toffeecakesxox
OK, that ending? HILARIOUS. I was giggling the entire time.
And, yay! Some people are on Prince Charming's and Cinderella's side! W00T!
-toffeecakesxox. :)
OK, that ending? HILARIOUS. I was giggling the entire time.
And, yay! Some people are on Prince Charming's and Cinderella's side! W00T!
-toffeecakesxox. :)
12/25/2008 c12 3AndstillIRise
why can't her father come and take her and the kids away? who is paying for them to live like they do? does the mom have a job, or does the dad pay child support? surely the court will side with the dad if the mom is abusing finley? can't wait to read the next one. peace
3AndstillIRisewhy can't her father come and take her and the kids away? who is paying for them to live like they do? does the mom have a job, or does the dad pay child support? surely the court will side with the dad if the mom is abusing finley? can't wait to read the next one. peace
12/25/2008 c12 21Aurette
I'm absolutely loving this story. Camden is a sweetheart, and I love Finley and her little siblings. It's really well written for a NaNoWriMo story (speaking as a NaNoer myself, I can definitely say my attempts weren't... that polished). You said you don't like it as much as your other stories, so I'll definitely be reading your others. Keep up the good work, I'm definitely enjoying your writing!
21AuretteI'm absolutely loving this story. Camden is a sweetheart, and I love Finley and her little siblings. It's really well written for a NaNoWriMo story (speaking as a NaNoer myself, I can definitely say my attempts weren't... that polished). You said you don't like it as much as your other stories, so I'll definitely be reading your others. Keep up the good work, I'm definitely enjoying your writing!
12/25/2008 c12 J. C. Hunter
sigh. the mum is seriously screwed up. smashing a plate over your daughter's head? if that isn't the epitome for dysfunctional, i don't know what is.
sigh. the mum is seriously screwed up. smashing a plate over your daughter's head? if that isn't the epitome for dysfunctional, i don't know what is.