for If This Were a Fairytale1/8/2009 c5 kardula
hi... i just read the first five chapters and i need to say that i really like it! the story is so sad and i really, and i'm not lying here, started crying while reading... esp. the cafeteria scene was so mean. i just can't think of people who would do it although i believe that there are such people but it is just so heartless. i don't know. i could never do this. and her mom... omg, she has a very hard live... so... i'm going to read more right now and update every few chapters...
- very good story so far!
take care
hi... i just read the first five chapters and i need to say that i really like it! the story is so sad and i really, and i'm not lying here, started crying while reading... esp. the cafeteria scene was so mean. i just can't think of people who would do it although i believe that there are such people but it is just so heartless. i don't know. i could never do this. and her mom... omg, she has a very hard live... so... i'm going to read more right now and update every few chapters...
- very good story so far!
take care
1/6/2009 c19 FarFromGrace
Wow. I can't believe you already finished the story!
I loved it.
It really was the perfect spin to a Cinderella story.
And even though Camden doesn't make your top three favorite male characters that you've written. I really do like him.
Wow. I can't believe you already finished the story!
I loved it.
It really was the perfect spin to a Cinderella story.
And even though Camden doesn't make your top three favorite male characters that you've written. I really do like him.
1/6/2009 c19 
8Written
haha, that was definitely cute. it was very light and easy to read, and it must have been fun to write for nanowrimo! I loved camdens family especially :)
8Writtenhaha, that was definitely cute. it was very light and easy to read, and it must have been fun to write for nanowrimo! I loved camdens family especially :)
1/2/2009 c19 LondonLi
Great job with this. A real fairytale with a happy ending. Cinderella's my favorite, but you gave them a real relationship, which the story doesn't really have! Well done. Can't wait for your next updates!
Great job with this. A real fairytale with a happy ending. Cinderella's my favorite, but you gave them a real relationship, which the story doesn't really have! Well done. Can't wait for your next updates!
1/2/2009 c18 LondonLi
Aw! They all got reunited. But I can't believe that Rita left them there all weekend!
Aw! They all got reunited. But I can't believe that Rita left them there all weekend!
1/2/2009 c17 LondonLi
Ellie's such a bitch. Did she really think that would make him come back to her? And I feel terrible for Finley too. Her mom's certifiable. I think it's great that Camden can talk to his parents! At least one of them has a great set.
Ellie's such a bitch. Did she really think that would make him come back to her? And I feel terrible for Finley too. Her mom's certifiable. I think it's great that Camden can talk to his parents! At least one of them has a great set.
1/2/2009 c16 LondonLi
Well I'm not surprised she told her but I am surprised she waited so long to do so! I'm glad she at least got a ride back!
Well I'm not surprised she told her but I am surprised she waited so long to do so! I'm glad she at least got a ride back!
1/2/2009 c14 LondonLi
Good to know why her dad keeps his distance. However, her litany of bruises should have tipped of SOMEONE over the past couple of years! I really like Camden though!:)
Good to know why her dad keeps his distance. However, her litany of bruises should have tipped of SOMEONE over the past couple of years! I really like Camden though!:)
1/2/2009 c12 LondonLi
What I don't get is why their father doesn't try to make more of a difference if he gets how bad their life is!
What I don't get is why their father doesn't try to make more of a difference if he gets how bad their life is!
1/2/2009 c11 LondonLi
Aww, the nice people are showing some backbone. I just hope they're being genuine!
Aww, the nice people are showing some backbone. I just hope they're being genuine!
1/2/2009 c10 LondonLi
Well, I'm really glad he sticks up for her! But I have a feeling there will be really nasty repercussions.
Well, I'm really glad he sticks up for her! But I have a feeling there will be really nasty repercussions.
1/2/2009 c8 LondonLi
I'm sure you've told us before about being legally blind, but I always forget. You've given us a lot of perspective in this story that must come naturally to you. Well done. I'm surprised that Rita is that stupid to hit her daughter in front of someone.
I'm sure you've told us before about being legally blind, but I always forget. You've given us a lot of perspective in this story that must come naturally to you. Well done. I'm surprised that Rita is that stupid to hit her daughter in front of someone.