for Remembering to Forget3/28/2009 c1 Atlantis Rene
Sometimes a guy's gotta lose something to realize how much he treasures it.
Have you read the book from Steve Harvey? It's called 'Act Like A Woman, Think Like A Man'.
Maybe you can switch back and forth on the POVs for emphasis.
Please continue the story.
Sometimes a guy's gotta lose something to realize how much he treasures it.
Have you read the book from Steve Harvey? It's called 'Act Like A Woman, Think Like A Man'.
Maybe you can switch back and forth on the POVs for emphasis.
Please continue the story.
3/23/2009 c1 
7Vaudeville
Okay, it's just the prologue and I'm already hooked. I really, really hope that you intend to continue this. You can't get it out of your head, now I can't get it out of my head.
7VaudevilleOkay, it's just the prologue and I'm already hooked. I really, really hope that you intend to continue this. You can't get it out of your head, now I can't get it out of my head.
11/24/2008 c1 il capitano
hey i like this story of yours also
its very attention-grabbing like ur other story
update this one when possible
but ive really been looking forward to the new chap of pretending to breath, cmon plz update it
it is such an interesting story and it'd be a shame not to finish it as a plus uve really got me interested for it
but anyways luvd this story like i loved the other one
update as soon as possible plz!
hey i like this story of yours also
its very attention-grabbing like ur other story
update this one when possible
but ive really been looking forward to the new chap of pretending to breath, cmon plz update it
it is such an interesting story and it'd be a shame not to finish it as a plus uve really got me interested for it
but anyways luvd this story like i loved the other one
update as soon as possible plz!
11/14/2008 c1 10Aurora Corona
The title drew me in!
Although I really do hate that guy, I mean... can't live without sex for three weeks max? What an ass.
The girl's so naive yet so sweet for letting him use her like that, I'm sort of glad that she rejected his kiss this time.
That was cool.
No grammar mistakes, I think :D Awesome!
Love,
SP
ps UPDATE SOON!
10Aurora CoronaThe title drew me in!
Although I really do hate that guy, I mean... can't live without sex for three weeks max? What an ass.
The girl's so naive yet so sweet for letting him use her like that, I'm sort of glad that she rejected his kiss this time.
That was cool.
No grammar mistakes, I think :D Awesome!
Love,
SP
ps UPDATE SOON!
11/13/2008 c1 Xiaolu
Sounds really nice. :)
I love complex characters. God, he says he loves her but he still has "urges" as guys call them... Poor Cassy.
But I'm kinda glad she doesn't want it anymore, the cheating and such. :)
I wonder what he's going to do.
Update soon!
Sounds really nice. :)
I love complex characters. God, he says he loves her but he still has "urges" as guys call them... Poor Cassy.
But I'm kinda glad she doesn't want it anymore, the cheating and such. :)
I wonder what he's going to do.
Update soon!
11/13/2008 c1 4039301
This story has a promising start. It sounds very good in the first chapter and your summary. I hope that you update soon. I look forward to learning more about your characters and sinking into the plot.
4039301This story has a promising start. It sounds very good in the first chapter and your summary. I hope that you update soon. I look forward to learning more about your characters and sinking into the plot.
11/13/2008 c1 meduse
oh! it sounds awesome!
me happy!
update soon, and peace :)
i did not just say that.
~DixieAusten
oh! it sounds awesome!
me happy!
update soon, and peace :)
i did not just say that.
~DixieAusten