for Songs of the Soul8/21/2009 c1 
4B. J. Winters
I was looking for something to read with my morning coffee and this fit the bill. Most enjoyable. Good choice on the repeat line and where you chose to insert it. I liked how you phrased the 'pick up the phone' lines in particular - conveyed both action and longing. I shall be reading more.
4B. J. WintersI was looking for something to read with my morning coffee and this fit the bill. Most enjoyable. Good choice on the repeat line and where you chose to insert it. I liked how you phrased the 'pick up the phone' lines in particular - conveyed both action and longing. I shall be reading more.
5/26/2009 c9 AdiGal
That was nice.
~*Oh, people say the night reveals no things,
But I say that it may show everything.*~
I can't agree more with that one...
I liked the rhyming, good job!
-AG (:
That was nice.
~*Oh, people say the night reveals no things,
But I say that it may show everything.*~
I can't agree more with that one...
I liked the rhyming, good job!
-AG (:
5/26/2009 c8 AdiGal
Heartbreak is a bitch, isn' it? I wish I could just 'turn off' pain like that :P...
Nice one!
-AG
Heartbreak is a bitch, isn' it? I wish I could just 'turn off' pain like that :P...
Nice one!
-AG
5/26/2009 c1 AdiGal
That was really sweet and kinda sad.
*I could say I don’t love you, don’t need you,
But we’d both know that’d be a lie.*
I adore those lines!
-AG :)
That was really sweet and kinda sad.
*I could say I don’t love you, don’t need you,
But we’d both know that’d be a lie.*
I adore those lines!
-AG :)