
5/7/2010 c1
29fictionalxbliss
Ah, Superman. Gotta love him. Cute poem, I liked it. :) All I needed to hear was 'Superman' to get my attention.

Ah, Superman. Gotta love him. Cute poem, I liked it. :) All I needed to hear was 'Superman' to get my attention.
12/4/2008 c1
1margo lily
That was amazing!
I really wish I was good at writing poetry, but I'm really horrible at it.
I really enjoyed this piece.
It was written very well.

That was amazing!
I really wish I was good at writing poetry, but I'm really horrible at it.
I really enjoyed this piece.
It was written very well.
11/14/2008 c1
34Smoky Bear
me neither with the sappy love poetry, but i figure if you've made the exception to write it then i should make the exception to read it, lol. It's a sweet piece, full of gushy feeling without being overbearing. the humour in the last stanza works well and bounces off the sentiment. great job.

me neither with the sappy love poetry, but i figure if you've made the exception to write it then i should make the exception to read it, lol. It's a sweet piece, full of gushy feeling without being overbearing. the humour in the last stanza works well and bounces off the sentiment. great job.