for Infection, Redemption3/11/2009 c1 
10Elephant-Artist
I really liked this poem you did. I like the repetition in it. You described it so well. I like the beginning par the most. I like the infection part too. Your poem has a nice flow to it. Please read and review my stuff. I want to be a good writer some day.
10Elephant-ArtistI really liked this poem you did. I like the repetition in it. You described it so well. I like the beginning par the most. I like the infection part too. Your poem has a nice flow to it. Please read and review my stuff. I want to be a good writer some day.
1/22/2009 c1 17sunday night sky
Hey, I love this! I like how the half rhymes, rhythm and repetition make the poem flow perfectly. Great description! Nice piece =]
PS I see why you commented on the New Zealand thing now! I will be flying over to your country in approx 2 months! SO EXCITED!
17sunday night skyHey, I love this! I like how the half rhymes, rhythm and repetition make the poem flow perfectly. Great description! Nice piece =]
PS I see why you commented on the New Zealand thing now! I will be flying over to your country in approx 2 months! SO EXCITED!