for Wildflower10/9/2010 c22 AbbeyXD
so what happens after that? what's Daphne's reaction? what happens to Adena and Damien? I was looking forward to the Epilogue but it felt sort of incomplete. I think you should re-write it :)
so what happens after that? what's Daphne's reaction? what happens to Adena and Damien? I was looking forward to the Epilogue but it felt sort of incomplete. I think you should re-write it :)
10/3/2010 c21 AbbeyXD
yay! Rochester's dead! Damien's brother's been caught and they are happy! I'm happy! Can't wait for the Epilogue! Absloutely loved it!
yay! Rochester's dead! Damien's brother's been caught and they are happy! I'm happy! Can't wait for the Epilogue! Absloutely loved it!
10/3/2010 c20 
1Lomesa
Wow, a lot happened in this chapter... Poor Tory, losing her mother and father so close together. Then Rochester, glad he's out of the picture.
I wonder if this is going to be the end of the rebellion or if it's part of something bigger, maybe?
1LomesaWow, a lot happened in this chapter... Poor Tory, losing her mother and father so close together. Then Rochester, glad he's out of the picture.
I wonder if this is going to be the end of the rebellion or if it's part of something bigger, maybe?
9/25/2010 c19 AbbeyXD
aw he left her! but I guess it's a good thing since he'll be able to get to the capital without getting caught by the rebels which are now at the estate but omigosh! update! I can't wait for the next chapter so plz plz plz update soon! :D
aw he left her! but I guess it's a good thing since he'll be able to get to the capital without getting caught by the rebels which are now at the estate but omigosh! update! I can't wait for the next chapter so plz plz plz update soon! :D
9/18/2010 c17 karischma
updates! pleeasse. I can't wait!
updates! pleeasse. I can't wait!
9/18/2010 c17 stormclouds
Loveitloveitloveit! I read this story in one sitting. I can't wait for chap. 17 and 18!
Loveitloveitloveit! I read this story in one sitting. I can't wait for chap. 17 and 18!
9/18/2010 c17 Jackie
love it! Please please updatesoon!
love it! Please please updatesoon!
9/4/2010 c15 hmm
Me again (from a few chapters back?) Good job, keep going. Maybe it's b/c I'm a little sleepy, but maybe you can re-read this chapter one more time? I dunno, the grammar/text seems a little...jumpy, like I was missing something...
Me again (from a few chapters back?) Good job, keep going. Maybe it's b/c I'm a little sleepy, but maybe you can re-read this chapter one more time? I dunno, the grammar/text seems a little...jumpy, like I was missing something...
8/30/2010 c14 AbbeyXD
do I need to say I loved it? lol but I seriously do. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
do I need to say I loved it? lol but I seriously do. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
8/29/2010 c14 A
Love this story! plz update soon! can't wait to find out what happens next! :D
Love this story! plz update soon! can't wait to find out what happens next! :D
8/21/2010 c12 hmm
You know, I like this story a lot. I was almost going to skip it cause of the lack of reviews, but your language and style is very nice. I like Adena a lot...I really get sick of those selfish, Mary-sue, daughter of nobiility with a bad attitude (though considered "tomboys") protagonists...do you know what I'm talking about? Adena has that in her too, but she isn't flamboyant about it and she doesn't shrink from her duty. I KNOW that's actually the crux of the matter, but, still, the fact that she realizes the world does not revolve around her is refreshing. I'm always looking for stories like these...thanks for making my day!
You know, I like this story a lot. I was almost going to skip it cause of the lack of reviews, but your language and style is very nice. I like Adena a lot...I really get sick of those selfish, Mary-sue, daughter of nobiility with a bad attitude (though considered "tomboys") protagonists...do you know what I'm talking about? Adena has that in her too, but she isn't flamboyant about it and she doesn't shrink from her duty. I KNOW that's actually the crux of the matter, but, still, the fact that she realizes the world does not revolve around her is refreshing. I'm always looking for stories like these...thanks for making my day!
7/15/2010 c8 1Passionately Yours
Adena is really brave for a woman who seem so quiet. I really like her character very much. She also upholds her values very well. And Damien worried about her. ;D That's progress!
1Passionately YoursAdena is really brave for a woman who seem so quiet. I really like her character very much. She also upholds her values very well. And Damien worried about her. ;D That's progress!