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11/16/2008 c2 23fatbird33
good descriptions! Coquesttishly, cool word.

Damien sounds like a jerk!

i must say i find it strange that nathaniel hasn't met his own brother's wife...

"reliable predictability." nice:)

good conflicts. keep it up:)
11/16/2008 c1 fatbird33
good opening paragraph.

"Until she dissapeared." Nice line.

o good last line in the chapter.

nice job describing all of the characters.
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