for Toxic Figments1/22/2009 c1 
27Ember Eyed Girl
You strike me as an old timey writer. You seem to romance the language as you write, no matter how liberal the form. But, be careful when taking liberties with capitalization and spacing.
27Ember Eyed GirlYou strike me as an old timey writer. You seem to romance the language as you write, no matter how liberal the form. But, be careful when taking liberties with capitalization and spacing.
1/20/2009 c1 8Irresistible Apple
I agree with Annie, this is very insightful if you choose to read into it.
You did a wonderful job with the whole stream-of-concsiousness concept! The brevity of this piece made it especially fun to read. You really conveyed what it's like to be up at 4, on the internet and thinking about everything. Good job!
8Irresistible AppleI agree with Annie, this is very insightful if you choose to read into it.
You did a wonderful job with the whole stream-of-concsiousness concept! The brevity of this piece made it especially fun to read. You really conveyed what it's like to be up at 4, on the internet and thinking about everything. Good job!
1/20/2009 c1 Chancee
This is masterfully written I think. Your obsession with putting your feelings to internet and then posting said feelings to the world is very much like many of the rest of the folks on line.
I see your point in wondering why you should not say openly on line what you may think in person but not speak due to ridicule maybe. I am not sure if you were writing in reflection of an event you experienced in the middle of your piece,but it seemed very much personal and your feelings are very evident.
Over all you are drawn to the internet like many, just for the heck of the shielding of your physical face to reveal the real you in your mental state. Often times books are judged too easily by their covers, as well as people.
I truly enjoyed the read and very insightful. It is one for my favorites! Thank you for sharing!
This is masterfully written I think. Your obsession with putting your feelings to internet and then posting said feelings to the world is very much like many of the rest of the folks on line.
I see your point in wondering why you should not say openly on line what you may think in person but not speak due to ridicule maybe. I am not sure if you were writing in reflection of an event you experienced in the middle of your piece,but it seemed very much personal and your feelings are very evident.
Over all you are drawn to the internet like many, just for the heck of the shielding of your physical face to reveal the real you in your mental state. Often times books are judged too easily by their covers, as well as people.
I truly enjoyed the read and very insightful. It is one for my favorites! Thank you for sharing!