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2/27/2009 c1 1Phoenix Octavia Bright
(Am reviewing everyone who reviewed my Cinderella story)

And I noticed that you wrote in your profile that you were afraid to show your poetry to everyone, but I think it's pretty good.

It's pretty joyful and I love it.

PB
11/17/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
Whilst life is all depressing this does show some hope because at least we might get used to that music of life. Great metaphor!

~fleur
11/16/2008 c1 2Ocean Owl
This is great, I love the line "whilst tiptoeing to the base of the soul." I love music so this poem does indeed speak to me.

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