for Lust Is Only the Beginning2/22/2010 c7 
6WineAndRoses
Hey! I love your story and I really think you're a great writer! xD
Please update soon, I can't wait! :)
6WineAndRosesHey! I love your story and I really think you're a great writer! xD
Please update soon, I can't wait! :)
2/22/2010 c7 ebs
"Oh, my bad, I'll be sure to keep that in mind and drag her off to another room and do it." He said wrapping his arm around my waste.
not 'waste', waist
other than that i really liked this chap
update
"Oh, my bad, I'll be sure to keep that in mind and drag her off to another room and do it." He said wrapping his arm around my waste.
not 'waste', waist
other than that i really liked this chap
update
2/20/2010 c7 Obsession Changes Things
WOW THOSE RENTAL UNTILS ARE EXACTLY LIKE YOURS HAHAH! LOVED THE CHAPTER BUT I THINK THEY JUST NEED TO GO AT IT ALREDY, ITS MAKING ME FRUSTRATED BIG TIME! BESIDES WHATS HOLDING HER BACK WELL ALL KNOW SHE WANTS IT JUST AS MUCH AS HIM!
UPDATE SOON YOU HOBO!
WOW THOSE RENTAL UNTILS ARE EXACTLY LIKE YOURS HAHAH! LOVED THE CHAPTER BUT I THINK THEY JUST NEED TO GO AT IT ALREDY, ITS MAKING ME FRUSTRATED BIG TIME! BESIDES WHATS HOLDING HER BACK WELL ALL KNOW SHE WANTS IT JUST AS MUCH AS HIM!
UPDATE SOON YOU HOBO!
2/20/2010 c7 1AlphaBeatKayGee
Raunchy little chapter you've got here. I like how he stood up to her nasty mom! Anyhow.. Its been like.. A decade since you last updated so... Update soopn!
1AlphaBeatKayGeeRaunchy little chapter you've got here. I like how he stood up to her nasty mom! Anyhow.. Its been like.. A decade since you last updated so... Update soopn!
2/20/2010 c7 13iammisspedia
Hilarious and hot combination of the two.
Wonder how sweet and steamy their lovemaking will be?
^^
13iammisspediaHilarious and hot combination of the two.
Wonder how sweet and steamy their lovemaking will be?
^^
2/8/2010 c2 AsianPearl101
So far I find this so cute and funny. I love how she's not falling into it and how he sometimes slips into childish whining! It's cute!
So far I find this so cute and funny. I love how she's not falling into it and how he sometimes slips into childish whining! It's cute!
12/26/2009 c6 2Amber DeFabio
I love this chapter. I was so disappointed that Jen interrupted them though. Haha. Write the next chapter very soon.
2Amber DeFabioI love this chapter. I was so disappointed that Jen interrupted them though. Haha. Write the next chapter very soon.
12/18/2009 c6 7Corrupt the Innocent
very well detailed and very easy to picture in ones head.
well done.
now i want to read the next chapter .
-puy
7Corrupt the Innocentvery well detailed and very easy to picture in ones head.
well done.
now i want to read the next chapter .
-puy
12/18/2009 c5 Corrupt the Innocent
o.o i have to tell you my comment more directly for this chapter o.o and yes you did do pretty good for putting it in a guys point of view ^^ well for a guy XD gj mate ^^
-puy
o.o i have to tell you my comment more directly for this chapter o.o and yes you did do pretty good for putting it in a guys point of view ^^ well for a guy XD gj mate ^^
-puy
12/17/2009 c3 Corrupt the Innocent
i dont normally read this kinda writing but i like it ^^
sounds painful, but i like it XD
-puy
i dont normally read this kinda writing but i like it ^^
sounds painful, but i like it XD
-puy
12/17/2009 c2 Corrupt the Innocent
o.o damn would suck to lose a hand o.o
^^ it was really good now to see what happens next ^^
-puy
o.o damn would suck to lose a hand o.o
^^ it was really good now to see what happens next ^^
-puy