for She Will Be Loved6/3/2019 c1 
2stunningaurora
OMDG (*oh my ducking god, hehe*) THIS IS DUCKING GOOD, THE CLIFFHANGER THINGIE IS A GREAT WAY TO END THIS KIND OF 1-SHOT CAUSE THEN U CAN LET UR READER'S IMAGINATION GO ON A FREAKING FIELD DAY... AHHHH!
2stunningauroraOMDG (*oh my ducking god, hehe*) THIS IS DUCKING GOOD, THE CLIFFHANGER THINGIE IS A GREAT WAY TO END THIS KIND OF 1-SHOT CAUSE THEN U CAN LET UR READER'S IMAGINATION GO ON A FREAKING FIELD DAY... AHHHH!
3/30/2017 c1 Hayley
This was good
I want to know what happens next
My imagination is having a field day
This was good
I want to know what happens next
My imagination is having a field day
8/26/2016 c1 2Severed Arm
You did the Hugs and Kisses too... Of course you did oh my GOD OF COURSE YOU DID. I'M watCHING YOU YO. WATCHING. YOU. Your level of angst is right up my alley though. it's perfect and doesn't completely destroy me (only you know the regular safe and healthy destruction of 80% of me)
2Severed ArmYou did the Hugs and Kisses too... Of course you did oh my GOD OF COURSE YOU DID. I'M watCHING YOU YO. WATCHING. YOU. Your level of angst is right up my alley though. it's perfect and doesn't completely destroy me (only you know the regular safe and healthy destruction of 80% of me)
8/30/2015 c1 Guest
You are literally the best at endings. One word says it all sometimes. Another great story 3
You are literally the best at endings. One word says it all sometimes. Another great story 3
5/24/2015 c1 8theBatmanisShakakah
I love this :) I love how you told their story in a short amount of words and it completely hooked me even though it was mostly her monologue. I love how much it reveals about both characters and even though hardly anything happened in this oneshot I still felt like I knew the characters intimately. I especially love the ending :)
8theBatmanisShakakahI love this :) I love how you told their story in a short amount of words and it completely hooked me even though it was mostly her monologue. I love how much it reveals about both characters and even though hardly anything happened in this oneshot I still felt like I knew the characters intimately. I especially love the ending :)
1/7/2015 c1 1OneLoneStar
This almost made me cry. And then he whispers, "Wait." I love this oneshot! Is there a sequel?
1OneLoneStarThis almost made me cry. And then he whispers, "Wait." I love this oneshot! Is there a sequel?
11/11/2013 c1 Guest
:O
Oh, oh my gosh.
This was soo good!
That ending though C;
:O
Oh, oh my gosh.
This was soo good!
That ending though C;
7/29/2013 c1 Carlz92
Okay so, I liked it. I like what you were trying to achieve with it but I feel that it lacks any real depth. Her speech went on for far too long, she was basically rambling about wanting to get married, it was a bit uneventful and annoying.
You could have added more detail so that it made sense or at least made the reason she "had no more tears left" was for something a bit more deep and meaningful.
I just felt like there waa something missing. Sorry. Also, the cliffhanger was genius and I liked that part. I like how it was very abrupt but it also sounded unfinished
Sorry for the long review, I don't normally review on any stories but I felt like this needed to be said.
Okay so, I liked it. I like what you were trying to achieve with it but I feel that it lacks any real depth. Her speech went on for far too long, she was basically rambling about wanting to get married, it was a bit uneventful and annoying.
You could have added more detail so that it made sense or at least made the reason she "had no more tears left" was for something a bit more deep and meaningful.
I just felt like there waa something missing. Sorry. Also, the cliffhanger was genius and I liked that part. I like how it was very abrupt but it also sounded unfinished
Sorry for the long review, I don't normally review on any stories but I felt like this needed to be said.
4/5/2013 c1 A
Why the cliffhanger? It's great, though. Part 2, please? At least just another one about what happens next?
Why the cliffhanger? It's great, though. Part 2, please? At least just another one about what happens next?