for Prey6/28/2009 c1 
7I. Degolier
Thank you for your review! Your story here is creative, particularly the part about the Dreamcatchers. I also like Bailey's character because she seems quite adaptable, despite the fact that her character carries an angry undertone. Some of her behaviors strike me as unusual, such as arguing with her mother right after her verbal sparring with the counselor (does she really have enough energy to do both on so little sleep?), but as a whole the story is quite realistic and I would be interested in seeing how it continues.
7I. DegolierThank you for your review! Your story here is creative, particularly the part about the Dreamcatchers. I also like Bailey's character because she seems quite adaptable, despite the fact that her character carries an angry undertone. Some of her behaviors strike me as unusual, such as arguing with her mother right after her verbal sparring with the counselor (does she really have enough energy to do both on so little sleep?), but as a whole the story is quite realistic and I would be interested in seeing how it continues.
5/29/2009 c1 4Slideshow
Well I frankly liked it. You're being too hard on yourself. I don't think there's a need to rewrite anything, you big estupido. I think you need to post the second chapter, is what I think.
-knows best-
OH NICE. YOU UPDATED LAST YEAR. Post the second chapter. Now.
NOW CEE, OR I WONT TALK TO YOU ANYMORE!
It is HIGH time for another chapter. We want more Trance! You need to make us love Trance. You owe it to us D:
4SlideshowWell I frankly liked it. You're being too hard on yourself. I don't think there's a need to rewrite anything, you big estupido. I think you need to post the second chapter, is what I think.
-knows best-
OH NICE. YOU UPDATED LAST YEAR. Post the second chapter. Now.
NOW CEE, OR I WONT TALK TO YOU ANYMORE!
It is HIGH time for another chapter. We want more Trance! You need to make us love Trance. You owe it to us D:
11/19/2008 c1 Nona Lisa
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"Many nights I would lie awake on the roof of my house, not picking out constellations, but trying to see a star die."
still one of my favorite lines...it's so ironic and lovely, lol.
trance is a hot demented bas.tard, and
bailey is a nice insomniac from what i've seen. i think the relationship with her mom is so tense and realistic; sad but i love it.
when do the two tortured souls meet, haha?
-is too lazy to log in-
"Many nights I would lie awake on the roof of my house, not picking out constellations, but trying to see a star die."
still one of my favorite lines...it's so ironic and lovely, lol.
trance is a hot demented bas.tard, and
bailey is a nice insomniac from what i've seen. i think the relationship with her mom is so tense and realistic; sad but i love it.
when do the two tortured souls meet, haha?