
11/19/2008 c1
56from beneath the bell jar
Very intriguing all around. Title is very eye-catching and works quite well for the poem. very good imagery, very thought-provoking. Flows like a stream of thought; stilted in a seemingly deliberate way. Very well-expressed. I love the ending. Well the whole thing was good actually.

Very intriguing all around. Title is very eye-catching and works quite well for the poem. very good imagery, very thought-provoking. Flows like a stream of thought; stilted in a seemingly deliberate way. Very well-expressed. I love the ending. Well the whole thing was good actually.
11/18/2008 c1
55Paperclippe
God, this was beautiful. So easy to relate to in its simplicity, and such a perfect title. This was painfully wonderful.

God, this was beautiful. So easy to relate to in its simplicity, and such a perfect title. This was painfully wonderful.