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11/20/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I got a bit confused with the beginning there. I couldn't tell if that second line was part of the title or not. Maybe bold the title, if it is?

Again punctuating the end as if the whole thing was one sentence didn't seem right to be. Other than that I loved the piece. Your descriptions were great and I really liked your use of brackets

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