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6/14/2012 c1 10Aerith Rei
Thank you for the review! And I love this. It's actually very inspiring. I never thought of writing in prose, but this was absolutely stunning with the imagery. Prose done right!
11/19/2008 c1 75clockwork kiss
i really love the first paragraph (minus the first sentence... out of place and too graphic for me). The second paragraph feels like a completely different poem and loses my interest. But back to the first one... great writing in there. I love the images, and i can see them in my head. love the jellyfish fingers, but i think you could cut out "in the motion-censor lights". i lost the image there and i think it was overkill. but the tree, Mozart, and muscles imagery were beautiful. nice writing.

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