for Juvenile Hall7/18/2009 c1 
4Full Stop
I love this story as well. The ending was awesome, the whole reality prison thing worked really really well in this context. It didn't feel like some random metaphor slapped on the end rather something intertwined with the whole story.
4Full StopI love this story as well. The ending was awesome, the whole reality prison thing worked really really well in this context. It didn't feel like some random metaphor slapped on the end rather something intertwined with the whole story.
11/20/2008 c1 2Hallucinogenic Poison
I do like this to the point of realism, however, there ARE a lot of 'factual discrepencies' as you like to call them.
I think it went a little too fast for my tastes, but then again, all stories end TOO soon, don't you think? :)
I like the idea of reading and reviewing people who read and review your stories and I think that I'm going to do that too, except that I have yet to receive a review or anything for either of my stories.
Have a good day!
2Hallucinogenic PoisonI do like this to the point of realism, however, there ARE a lot of 'factual discrepencies' as you like to call them.
I think it went a little too fast for my tastes, but then again, all stories end TOO soon, don't you think? :)
I like the idea of reading and reviewing people who read and review your stories and I think that I'm going to do that too, except that I have yet to receive a review or anything for either of my stories.
Have a good day!