for Chapped Lips, Broken Heart11/21/2008 c1 PixieTears
Hey
I usually dont like Haikus don't know hy just never liked them much but if they were all like yours the would beat any sonnets A**.
Lots of love
Nusi
Hey
I usually dont like Haikus don't know hy just never liked them much but if they were all like yours the would beat any sonnets A**.
Lots of love
Nusi
11/20/2008 c1 
55Paperclippe
This was fantastic. It was short and perfect, and the feeling was so vivid. This is an excellent metaphor that I have never heard before. So human. I wouldn't change a thing.
55PaperclippeThis was fantastic. It was short and perfect, and the feeling was so vivid. This is an excellent metaphor that I have never heard before. So human. I wouldn't change a thing.