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8/17/2010 c1 7Zaarah
I really like this a lot. There's something very honest and raw about the words you've chosen and the way you've written your poem, definitely not like any I've read on here. I'm not sure if this autobiographical because it takes a lot of guts to put something like this out there. It had me hooked right from the start, and I could imagine almost every line you wrote there. There's a steady pace right from the beginning to the end. It's romance, suspense, thriller all rolled into one. I like the title and the character names too. Well done! Instant-favourite! :)
1/10/2010 c1 1RetardedChicken
I love the way you wrote thiss. And the words you wrote in bold was really effective. This poem is really realistic and shows what happens in the world, great work of showing she's still strong and Legacy is a great name for the baby. Well done and thanks for the review to mine becasue I don't really like the story so I think I'll just delete it but I may use the characters in something else.

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