for Keep the Mood6/19/2012 c1 
2heyitsstupidme
wow. i read that while listening to the song and it was just great. i'd like to read more of this.
2heyitsstupidmewow. i read that while listening to the song and it was just great. i'd like to read more of this.
3/19/2009 c1 3Balliett
that broke my heart (in a good way, don't worry). your writing cheers me up, even when it's so sad and lonely and filled with aching. i want to collect all your writing in a book, take it with me everywhere, and read it whenever i want. that would be lovely.
this line stood out to me a lot: "Fountain love spouted from rusty bed posts in the rusty hotel room above the rusty bar in the rusty little town that no one loved, just made love in, until sunrise when they left and crumbled." it's such a poignant line.
lovelylovelylovely. -swoon-
3Balliettthat broke my heart (in a good way, don't worry). your writing cheers me up, even when it's so sad and lonely and filled with aching. i want to collect all your writing in a book, take it with me everywhere, and read it whenever i want. that would be lovely.
this line stood out to me a lot: "Fountain love spouted from rusty bed posts in the rusty hotel room above the rusty bar in the rusty little town that no one loved, just made love in, until sunrise when they left and crumbled." it's such a poignant line.
lovelylovelylovely. -swoon-
11/22/2008 c1 the-fire-child
Very potent. I like your use of imagery. The way you describe things is extraordinary.
Kamara
Very potent. I like your use of imagery. The way you describe things is extraordinary.
Kamara