for Losing Control5/3/2009 c17 WritingWithChocolate
Hey! This was a very satisfying ending, and I loved the epilogue. It's so sweet that Delsin and Avery got married! I'm so glad everything worked out!
Hey! This was a very satisfying ending, and I loved the epilogue. It's so sweet that Delsin and Avery got married! I'm so glad everything worked out!
5/2/2009 c14 jushmita
hey i totally LOVE ur story...but mind explaing whats this resevation thingy?i am from India and have no idea whats it all about...is it special areas where red indians live or something...sorry if i got it wrong...err...basically why i am asking u!:)
once again...its a lovely story...:)
hey i totally LOVE ur story...but mind explaing whats this resevation thingy?i am from India and have no idea whats it all about...is it special areas where red indians live or something...sorry if i got it wrong...err...basically why i am asking u!:)
once again...its a lovely story...:)
4/15/2009 c17 
2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
I love the story up until this chapter at the end. It seems like you rushed it, but I still really love this story. Maybe you could make a sequel ^_^
2XxSCENEandHEARDxXI love the story up until this chapter at the end. It seems like you rushed it, but I still really love this story. Maybe you could make a sequel ^_^
4/6/2009 c1 WritingWithChocolate
kai...im reviewing for the last chappie so far...cause fp only allows one rev. per chappie...*growls menacingly at comp*...but i was wondering...who is Briggs again?
kai...im reviewing for the last chappie so far...cause fp only allows one rev. per chappie...*growls menacingly at comp*...but i was wondering...who is Briggs again?
4/6/2009 c16 WritingWithChocolate
OMG! SO MUCH DRAMA! and...why is Tommy kissing Avery's forehead? hmm...do i sense more drama in the future XD...anyhoo...UPDATE!
OMG! SO MUCH DRAMA! and...why is Tommy kissing Avery's forehead? hmm...do i sense more drama in the future XD...anyhoo...UPDATE!
4/5/2009 c16 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
Please hurry up and make the next chapter, I'm dying to know what happens next!^_^
Please hurry up and make the next chapter, I'm dying to know what happens next!^_^
3/30/2009 c15 WritingWithChocolate
O_O...wow...the plot thickens...is this the guy killing the prophetesses? AARGGH u gots me hangin by a thread dearie...PLZ UPDATE SON
O_O...wow...the plot thickens...is this the guy killing the prophetesses? AARGGH u gots me hangin by a thread dearie...PLZ UPDATE SON
3/30/2009 c15 JZK
Poor Delsin
By not pushing Tak away aswell as Delsin - it makes it seem like shes picking Delsin over her own cousin - and that is is very selfish
I cant wait to find who the murderer is - its probably someone who we would never suspect - or is it a new character?
Poor Delsin
By not pushing Tak away aswell as Delsin - it makes it seem like shes picking Delsin over her own cousin - and that is is very selfish
I cant wait to find who the murderer is - its probably someone who we would never suspect - or is it a new character?
3/30/2009 c15 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
No! I want to read what happens next. I hate cliffhangers, especially on stories I really like. TT.TT please update soon...
No! I want to read what happens next. I hate cliffhangers, especially on stories I really like. TT.TT please update soon...
3/17/2009 c14 WritingWithChocolate
ga...i would be SO scared if i was avery...hmm..wonder who IS killing all of the prophetesses...and what IS happening with her powers? and when the waitress told her to be careful...was that just a casual "be careful" or a i-think-ur-in-danger kinda "be careful? anyhoo...I IS THIRSTING FOR MORE! UPDATE SON!
ga...i would be SO scared if i was avery...hmm..wonder who IS killing all of the prophetesses...and what IS happening with her powers? and when the waitress told her to be careful...was that just a casual "be careful" or a i-think-ur-in-danger kinda "be careful? anyhoo...I IS THIRSTING FOR MORE! UPDATE SON!
3/15/2009 c13 WritingWithChocolate
aw...thats SO SAD! :'(...i feel so bad for Delsin...who stabbed Maiara?
update son!
aw...thats SO SAD! :'(...i feel so bad for Delsin...who stabbed Maiara?
update son!