for Love Story11/22/2008 c1 
13blurrylights
Hm...overall, this was a great story. Though the random proposal after not seeing each other for four/five years was a little weird, it was pretty believable. Aidan and Mallory are a cute couple, but I still don't really get why Aidan broke up with mallory, and was still planning on proposing to her, but I guess that's just creative license. Great job! :)
13blurrylightsHm...overall, this was a great story. Though the random proposal after not seeing each other for four/five years was a little weird, it was pretty believable. Aidan and Mallory are a cute couple, but I still don't really get why Aidan broke up with mallory, and was still planning on proposing to her, but I guess that's just creative license. Great job! :)