for TONIGHT9/6/2011 c1 monkeyface1
i dont know how you cried but i cried, sobbing,sniifling and screaming saying why? this story is a tragedy but truelove till the end and im glad i read it. :)
i dont know how you cried but i cried, sobbing,sniifling and screaming saying why? this story is a tragedy but truelove till the end and im glad i read it. :)
5/28/2010 c1 
3lilmissAchi
The other night I saw this posted at ur fb...
I really wanted to read but I was lazy,lolz...
Actually I'm still in a lazy-mode today but whatever..
Gah!
I cried when he went to her grave.
ouches! Huhu...
And I also love that song so much...
Parang nafe-feel ko tuloy ang sakit pag iniwan, lolz
Mahirap pala nho? HAhah...
Wah!
Nice piece,..
But I really hope you'd post My Own Fairytale here...
I know u told me before it's already TAMED now...
but MOF is really great.
Can't forget it =(
Hehe...maawa ka naman samin ng mga kaklase ko oh, XD
3lilmissAchiThe other night I saw this posted at ur fb...
I really wanted to read but I was lazy,lolz...
Actually I'm still in a lazy-mode today but whatever..
Gah!
I cried when he went to her grave.
ouches! Huhu...
And I also love that song so much...
Parang nafe-feel ko tuloy ang sakit pag iniwan, lolz
Mahirap pala nho? HAhah...
Wah!
Nice piece,..
But I really hope you'd post My Own Fairytale here...
I know u told me before it's already TAMED now...
but MOF is really great.
Can't forget it =(
Hehe...maawa ka naman samin ng mga kaklase ko oh, XD
5/15/2010 c1 3humyrax
This is an amazing one-shot!
i cry everytime i read it :'(
Keep up the good work
Humaira :)
3humyraxThis is an amazing one-shot!
i cry everytime i read it :'(
Keep up the good work
Humaira :)
3/15/2009 c1 5belisha
im sure that the higest complement to a writer would telling them that their piece inspired true emotions. congrats, you had me in tears.
R.I.P 20 Joseph Canden who couldn't live without his beautiful wife.
5belishaim sure that the higest complement to a writer would telling them that their piece inspired true emotions. congrats, you had me in tears.
R.I.P 20 Joseph Canden who couldn't live without his beautiful wife.
11/24/2008 c1 The Reverse Edge Blade
This was really a sad story, but really touching and well-written. Your descriptions were good, and the emotions you described, the bitterness and sorrow, was really beautiful. This will go in my favorites. Keep at it and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade
This was really a sad story, but really touching and well-written. Your descriptions were good, and the emotions you described, the bitterness and sorrow, was really beautiful. This will go in my favorites. Keep at it and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade
11/24/2008 c1 1failwithpride
hey!
this is a relli sad story..but i read it and its relli relli good so far! u have to update soon..and is this a spose to be a supernatural story or something?
reply?
royal highness
1failwithpridehey!
this is a relli sad story..but i read it and its relli relli good so far! u have to update soon..and is this a spose to be a supernatural story or something?
reply?
royal highness
11/23/2008 c1 6Wicca Girl
OMG! This story was so sad =[ but so romantic all at the same time. Yup the tears fell and it didnt help that I was listening to a sad song. Great job!
6Wicca GirlOMG! This story was so sad =[ but so romantic all at the same time. Yup the tears fell and it didnt help that I was listening to a sad song. Great job!
11/23/2008 c1 45deefective
Oh, this was a really sad but sweet story. Reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. But Anyways, I like how you wrote it because honestly, it couldn't have fit the piece more. Also, third person was the way to go. I think it gave the story the extra dimension of narrative but also, it was still speaking in the voice of the main character. Nicely done.
-Dee, from the Review Marathon.
[Link's in my profile.]
45deefectiveOh, this was a really sad but sweet story. Reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. But Anyways, I like how you wrote it because honestly, it couldn't have fit the piece more. Also, third person was the way to go. I think it gave the story the extra dimension of narrative but also, it was still speaking in the voice of the main character. Nicely done.
-Dee, from the Review Marathon.
[Link's in my profile.]
11/23/2008 c1 Vici Daily
Wow that was emotional, tears filled my eyes and...i feel do sorry for him. Great work! ~angela
Wow that was emotional, tears filled my eyes and...i feel do sorry for him. Great work! ~angela