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3/4/2009 c1 1E.C. Shelley
love it all. the disjointed-dystopian setting. (perhaps more elaboration on the upper and lower city?) the characters' dimensions. (i'm particularly interested in remus and romulus' relationship. it's never said they're brothers, but it still seems taboo for some reason? i'm also wondering how hypnos and endymion play into the plot of our unlikely gang of revolutionaries.) the greek/roman mythology references. (will these play into the plot or are they just the result of fancy? ;D)

anyhow, you have to continue it. if you don't continue this i won't continue she vanished! it's an eye for an eyeball and a tooth for a toothball! :P
11/25/2008 c1 4Snow W
There are too many great descriptions that I liked to name. My favorite characters so far are Helle, because her name is hott, and Hypnos, for the same reason. I love how you use ancient Grecian style names.

Oh, and you are fantastic. =D

I think I'm going to really like this one. So update often.

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