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for I'll fake it till the end

12/12/2008 c1 19Marbur
This... pretty much describes how I believe a lot of people feel, and try to act at least. Facades, I hate... but I also understand, I have several of my own, that are gradually fading together recently. This world is full of pain, full of harshness... and if I could lighten any of it at all... I would. That... in a way... is a part of my major plan... if I ever kick myself into action.

I hope this is just a poem, I hope you don't actually feel this way, not you... especially not you.

This poem... is a sample... of the darkness I see in this world... a darkness that feels impossible to escape.

Um... there are a few good things left in this world... I think... its just a matter of finding them.

Sometimes... being strong... only hurts.
11/24/2008 c1 81Princess-anna57
Expressive piece. Your rhyming is extremely cliche however, so maybe you could work on that. Keep writing.

~Anna~ ^_^

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