
9/28/2011 c4 annabethpj
Although the chances of your reading this are pretty slim since it has been nearly three years since the last update, I still want to beg you to complete this awesome story.
Although the chances of your reading this are pretty slim since it has been nearly three years since the last update, I still want to beg you to complete this awesome story.
1/13/2009 c4
9Narq
Wow! Wonderfully hiliarous story! I LOVE it! This is so good! I like the way you give all the characters (and the kitched) his/her/its own personality!
GREAT WRITING!
UPDATE!
Narq.

Wow! Wonderfully hiliarous story! I LOVE it! This is so good! I like the way you give all the characters (and the kitched) his/her/its own personality!
GREAT WRITING!
UPDATE!
Narq.
12/20/2008 c4
1vi-is-shorter-than-charlix33
girls. i am not happy.
charli is not a happy chappy.
whereis my next chapter? has it not been long enough?
i will be waiting
xx charli

girls. i am not happy.
charli is not a happy chappy.
whereis my next chapter? has it not been long enough?
i will be waiting
xx charli
11/27/2008 c2 Narq
wowow~ nice writing style,... but I think you need more descrition... there's far too much dialogue.
narq.
wowow~ nice writing style,... but I think you need more descrition... there's far too much dialogue.
narq.
11/27/2008 c1 Narq
interesting chapter - I'll like to read more so i'll shut up for now and click on the next button for the next chapter.
Narq.
interesting chapter - I'll like to read more so i'll shut up for now and click on the next button for the next chapter.
Narq.
11/25/2008 c2
1MARK In TIME
Yeah, just a question. Why the hell are you writing an American high school story if your Australian and secondly, why the hell are you writing reviews for yourself? That's at little...lame to put it lightly.
Good Luck...

Yeah, just a question. Why the hell are you writing an American high school story if your Australian and secondly, why the hell are you writing reviews for yourself? That's at little...lame to put it lightly.
Good Luck...
11/24/2008 c1
1lala-schme-besties-4eva
OMG you guys this story is totally amazing...i like can't wait for you to write more...you are writing more right? if you don't i swear i am going to cry...you don't want that now do you? no good. But like seriously keep writing it's really good. I mean i absolutely love it. I can see this story going places... my uncle is an publisher and if you guys keep writing it and getting like heaps of reviews i can ask him to publish it for you...OMG i can totally imagine this story as a book...how freakin awesome would that be? wow...but yeh that can't happen if you don't keep writing so please do.. you know what the consequences are if you don't hahahahhaahahahahhahaha...luv yas not that i really know you or anything
haha yeh
abossatross

OMG you guys this story is totally amazing...i like can't wait for you to write more...you are writing more right? if you don't i swear i am going to cry...you don't want that now do you? no good. But like seriously keep writing it's really good. I mean i absolutely love it. I can see this story going places... my uncle is an publisher and if you guys keep writing it and getting like heaps of reviews i can ask him to publish it for you...OMG i can totally imagine this story as a book...how freakin awesome would that be? wow...but yeh that can't happen if you don't keep writing so please do.. you know what the consequences are if you don't hahahahhaahahahahhahaha...luv yas not that i really know you or anything
haha yeh
abossatross