for The Wind and the Water4/3/2010 c1 
5Penn Dalies
This was really good. It reminded me of NYC standing on the Hudson in South Manhattan. I could feel the freezing, stinging water. I love cold and this is the perfect example of why I enjoy it so much.
5Penn DaliesThis was really good. It reminded me of NYC standing on the Hudson in South Manhattan. I could feel the freezing, stinging water. I love cold and this is the perfect example of why I enjoy it so much.
10/30/2009 c1 MIDDLEOFNOWEHR
:O I love this poem , It has a great rhythm and is very sort of..Strong. If you understand. x.x
Beautiful!
:O I love this poem , It has a great rhythm and is very sort of..Strong. If you understand. x.x
Beautiful!
10/16/2009 c1 59SoulSecret
I love the beautiful imagery you create here- I could almost taste the salty water and feel the gusts along with the poem's speaker. There is a very eternal and calm feeling which just emanates from your words. Overall, sensual and and captivating :)
59SoulSecretI love the beautiful imagery you create here- I could almost taste the salty water and feel the gusts along with the poem's speaker. There is a very eternal and calm feeling which just emanates from your words. Overall, sensual and and captivating :)
3/26/2009 c1 40Jareth the Monk
I've never seen the ocean though I've heard and smelled it in my dreams, but its always stormy. A good simple one this, and I found no mistakes in it. I recommend you listen to "Morning Sun" by Savatage (they are known as Trans Siberian Orchestra now).
40Jareth the MonkI've never seen the ocean though I've heard and smelled it in my dreams, but its always stormy. A good simple one this, and I found no mistakes in it. I recommend you listen to "Morning Sun" by Savatage (they are known as Trans Siberian Orchestra now).
3/22/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
You are such an amazing writer! Probably one of the best on here. I loved this one just as much as I loved your shadow one. This one leaves me in such a calm mood, I feel like I'm right there in the wind by the water.
I just recently posted 2 stories and I'd love if you could read and review them. Feedback from an author like you would mean the world.
1tonight we bloomYou are such an amazing writer! Probably one of the best on here. I loved this one just as much as I loved your shadow one. This one leaves me in such a calm mood, I feel like I'm right there in the wind by the water.
I just recently posted 2 stories and I'd love if you could read and review them. Feedback from an author like you would mean the world.
3/13/2009 c1 9Narq
I like the repetition of the first sentenence on all the stanzas, it gave a feeling that you are certianly on task and know what you are doing.
Narq.
9NarqI like the repetition of the first sentenence on all the stanzas, it gave a feeling that you are certianly on task and know what you are doing.
Narq.
3/5/2009 c1 4starry-eyed-ocean
ah, i love this, i can relate to the emotions.
as i said, I've always been a child of the ocean.
4starry-eyed-oceanah, i love this, i can relate to the emotions.
as i said, I've always been a child of the ocean.