
12/30/2008 c1
24Soen22
That was cute, I love love haiku, it's the type of structure I can actually write, hah. I loved the last line, it made me giggle. I really liked this because it was so bubbly.
-Emmi

That was cute, I love love haiku, it's the type of structure I can actually write, hah. I loved the last line, it made me giggle. I really liked this because it was so bubbly.
-Emmi
12/27/2008 c1
2dragonflydreamer
Haha, nice little piece. It got a chuckle out of me :)
I've seen a lot of poems like this, but I like your last line. It makes this unique and gives it a bit of personality.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Haha, nice little piece. It got a chuckle out of me :)
I've seen a lot of poems like this, but I like your last line. It makes this unique and gives it a bit of personality.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
12/22/2008 c1 maryallenOohKITTY
ahahahahahahahaaha. Merry Christmas! luv the haiku. mum is agitated and... Edward Cullen is comin to town!lol bye!
Ooh! look! a kitty! must...chase... cute...fluffy...kitty!
ahahahahahahahaaha. Merry Christmas! luv the haiku. mum is agitated and... Edward Cullen is comin to town!lol bye!
Ooh! look! a kitty! must...chase... cute...fluffy...kitty!
12/20/2008 c1 maryallen
lol. heheheheheheheheheheh short...(like me)and to the point.
lol. heheheheheheheheheheh short...(like me)and to the point.
11/28/2008 c1
71nevergoneforever
Fun!
Oddly, whenever i write a Haiku, i never only write one stanza, hm... Bit i like it this way. It's more punctuated!

Fun!
Oddly, whenever i write a Haiku, i never only write one stanza, hm... Bit i like it this way. It's more punctuated!