for Bright Idea11/1/2009 c1 
3MzEatsaLot
This is extremely powerful and I like how you use the sundae example, it just makes it even more moving. Wow, I really like this one.
3MzEatsaLotThis is extremely powerful and I like how you use the sundae example, it just makes it even more moving. Wow, I really like this one.
12/29/2008 c1 The Sweet Angel of Darkness
Heehee, I know exactly what you mean. Middle school is pretty crazy.
Heehee, I know exactly what you mean. Middle school is pretty crazy.
12/11/2008 c1 173Broken Winged Bird
Haha! I love it! "Who’s bright idea was it to/Put us all together/For six hours/Shoved into one building/With all that hurt/With tensions mounting/I want to send them flowers". This pretty much described my middle school experience. (Oh please don't make me go back...) :D This was awesome. Keep up the great work!
173Broken Winged BirdHaha! I love it! "Who’s bright idea was it to/Put us all together/For six hours/Shoved into one building/With all that hurt/With tensions mounting/I want to send them flowers". This pretty much described my middle school experience. (Oh please don't make me go back...) :D This was awesome. Keep up the great work!
12/2/2008 c1 8Irresistible Apple
Wow. You basically just described my 8th grade year! Not sure if that's a good thing hehe... but I liked it. Very true, and I like the way you didn't have a structure. I think it worked without stanzas...but maybe that's just me! Nice job, keep writing!
8Irresistible AppleWow. You basically just described my 8th grade year! Not sure if that's a good thing hehe... but I liked it. Very true, and I like the way you didn't have a structure. I think it worked without stanzas...but maybe that's just me! Nice job, keep writing!
11/27/2008 c1 71nevergoneforever
hm... :(.
its so darned true!
just 1 question: you want to send them flowers?
71nevergoneforeverhm... :(.
its so darned true!
just 1 question: you want to send them flowers?