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1/1/2009 c1 11thelasttears
goosebumps... i swear to god well i guess it is cold and im not wearing much but im crediting you poem because it's awesome!
12/15/2008 c1 10LeLa London
very simple and honest in a good way.
12/10/2008 c1 21MakeSarahSmile
This is probabaly my favorite poem I've ever read, and I know how you feel.

By the way, just saying, I feel like a creeper cause I've probably reviewed every single one of your stories.

Well, maybe it's not a bad thing, but still.
12/10/2008 c1 11crimson-reverie
i like the approach you took to this. the way you paralled it all with lies. the entire time the reader is having to remind themselves that it's a lie, which makes your point engraved.

very smart

yes, once again, i like it.
12/7/2008 c1 40All.PenNames.Must.Be.Unique
Wow. Harsh. Poor guy. Sadly, that's exactly how I felt just a few months ago lol.
11/29/2008 c1 21Tiernan Hunter
Completely and totally perfect. Really a lovely poem. Heart-wrenching and relatable. Really great.
11/28/2008 c1 15WiccanGypsy
This is really sweet in a sad-kind-of way. Well done

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