
7/17/2010 c1
3PrettyInPink101
luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it...
uh... LUV IT!

luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it luv it...
uh... LUV IT!
11/1/2009 c1 insaneoreos
WOOT! SEXY! more plz!
WOOT! SEXY! more plz!
6/12/2009 c1
23frogs of war
That was funny and cute.
I bet it was more fun writing this than studying.

That was funny and cute.
I bet it was more fun writing this than studying.
5/30/2009 c1
4Shinigamigirl87
This is freakin adorable and hot! How come you told me not to read your stuff? you are great at writing! Bad Sanya-chan! Do not deprive me of your nummy writings! *goes off to read more of your works*

This is freakin adorable and hot! How come you told me not to read your stuff? you are great at writing! Bad Sanya-chan! Do not deprive me of your nummy writings! *goes off to read more of your works*
3/21/2009 c1
6Kalista Jia
A bad-ass, mean looking incubus! Okay, so I am a bit shorter than the most incubi and maybe I do have kind of a feminine face, but still- ! Me, Cefier of the desert, a well known incubus despite my young age and certain…minor faults, was put under a spell that made me look like this! Where did my height go? I’m even shorter than most human males around me are, when usually, I would be at least a head taller than the most of them! And what’s with all my muscles disappearing? I’m not this skinny! I’m lean! Lean I tell ya!
Hahahahaha, this lil guy is funny.
Fucking hell, he’s gorgeous!
…And has nasty sleeping habits, being sprawled over the bed haphazardly, the cover hiding only his feet.
(another lol)
I am going to have pepper spray with me when I go to bed now... you never know when an evil lil buddy will drop by and attack you in your sleep!
ah isn't M rated stuff simply fun to write? muhahahahaha

A bad-ass, mean looking incubus! Okay, so I am a bit shorter than the most incubi and maybe I do have kind of a feminine face, but still- ! Me, Cefier of the desert, a well known incubus despite my young age and certain…minor faults, was put under a spell that made me look like this! Where did my height go? I’m even shorter than most human males around me are, when usually, I would be at least a head taller than the most of them! And what’s with all my muscles disappearing? I’m not this skinny! I’m lean! Lean I tell ya!
Hahahahaha, this lil guy is funny.
Fucking hell, he’s gorgeous!
…And has nasty sleeping habits, being sprawled over the bed haphazardly, the cover hiding only his feet.
(another lol)
I am going to have pepper spray with me when I go to bed now... you never know when an evil lil buddy will drop by and attack you in your sleep!
ah isn't M rated stuff simply fun to write? muhahahahaha
3/7/2009 c1
7Princess of Lies
You have to make a follow-up story for these two. The one where Cefier bottoms. *is a total perv*

You have to make a follow-up story for these two. The one where Cefier bottoms. *is a total perv*
12/5/2008 c1
2Jack Robinson
I love how you let the human be michievous too. Lots of stories make the person be seduced a weak, kind of feeble character, but this one seems fun. Cefier is usually a prankster but has a cute, modest side and the human is nervous at first but then a bit devious. Great characters and wonderful job explaining your incubus rules. Some writers make it sound like a manual (example: me) but that blended well into the story.

I love how you let the human be michievous too. Lots of stories make the person be seduced a weak, kind of feeble character, but this one seems fun. Cefier is usually a prankster but has a cute, modest side and the human is nervous at first but then a bit devious. Great characters and wonderful job explaining your incubus rules. Some writers make it sound like a manual (example: me) but that blended well into the story.
12/4/2008 c1 Gig Jackson
That was a really good story. A little fast, if they were both humans. But an incubus? Of course it's fast! Congrats, that was great. The description of scenery could use a little work, but I'm not one to point fingers. Voice of characters is amazing and realistic. You did an awesome job.
That was a really good story. A little fast, if they were both humans. But an incubus? Of course it's fast! Congrats, that was great. The description of scenery could use a little work, but I'm not one to point fingers. Voice of characters is amazing and realistic. You did an awesome job.