
12/11/2008 c1
14Thoughtful Silence
I really liked, precisely, as your summary implies, because of its ambuguity. I'm not much of a poet, but what I garnered from this was kinda the idea that you have to essentially accept some kind of pain, to get better. The words are simple, but the meaning not so... Meh, 'nuff of my mindless ramblings... long story short, this was very good.
The shortness of it just emphasised the feeling, it reads like a kind of philosophy... if any of that makes sense.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
- Silence

I really liked, precisely, as your summary implies, because of its ambuguity. I'm not much of a poet, but what I garnered from this was kinda the idea that you have to essentially accept some kind of pain, to get better. The words are simple, but the meaning not so... Meh, 'nuff of my mindless ramblings... long story short, this was very good.
The shortness of it just emphasised the feeling, it reads like a kind of philosophy... if any of that makes sense.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
- Silence
12/1/2008 c1 The Sweet Angel of Darkness
Hi again! This has so many different meanings. And I mean A LOT. It's good. I like the feeling to it. It's really encouraging.
Later!
Hi again! This has so many different meanings. And I mean A LOT. It's good. I like the feeling to it. It's really encouraging.
Later!