for Carbon Footprint12/1/2008 c5 
4Reine Ayten
When you said "an article caught my eye:" I was expecting an excerpt from the newspaper or a headline. Just saying. Otherwise you've written this quite well.
4Reine AytenWhen you said "an article caught my eye:" I was expecting an excerpt from the newspaper or a headline. Just saying. Otherwise you've written this quite well.
11/30/2008 c1 Reine Ayten
I have a couple of questions that might be just because I'm not studying this kind of stuff yet... so bear with me;
1) Are the varroa and the tracheal mites two different species?
2) Is this conversation taking place on Earth or on the Moon?
3) This might just be me, but I think you should maybe describe where they are before you start the minutes, or is that not a part of your assignment?
Overall, this was written quite well, just a few things might need to be cleared up for me, but remember I don't know all of this. (I'm in physics this semester.)
I have a couple of questions that might be just because I'm not studying this kind of stuff yet... so bear with me;
1) Are the varroa and the tracheal mites two different species?
2) Is this conversation taking place on Earth or on the Moon?
3) This might just be me, but I think you should maybe describe where they are before you start the minutes, or is that not a part of your assignment?
Overall, this was written quite well, just a few things might need to be cleared up for me, but remember I don't know all of this. (I'm in physics this semester.)