for Seven Signs It's Time To Take A Bath12/1/2008 c1 Fractured Illusion
I am a little confused regarding the acts/listing. Do you really need that? I can't see how it adds to the story since its significance overall is lost to me.
But I did enjoy reading though. You are very good with descriptions, they made me go "ew" :p I am glad I showered today, haah! Keep it up!
- Frac, from the Review Game
I am a little confused regarding the acts/listing. Do you really need that? I can't see how it adds to the story since its significance overall is lost to me.
But I did enjoy reading though. You are very good with descriptions, they made me go "ew" :p I am glad I showered today, haah! Keep it up!
- Frac, from the Review Game