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3/8/2009 c1 10Elephant-Artist
Very good imagery. Nice poem. I have nothing bad to say about it. Please read and review my stuff.
12/9/2008 c1 she smolders
The idea of December always puts me in a sad sort of mood and this poem really reminds me of that. I really love how you worked together mundane actions with the emotions in this poem and the overall tone is just bittersweet & beautiful. Take care.
12/1/2008 c1 91fairytale failure
I like how you connect what the car is doing (the steering wheel and the windshield wipers) to what you are thinking at the time; I especially liked the first three lines. One question - the last line says 'december's come and gone' - was it written a month in the future or almost a year in the past?

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