for Night2/12/2009 c1 
11Black Lotus Flower
It was a cute little poem and no, the formatting didn't come out right on my computer. :( But good job anyway! ^^
11Black Lotus FlowerIt was a cute little poem and no, the formatting didn't come out right on my computer. :( But good job anyway! ^^
1/18/2009 c1 15Annabelle Black
I really like this! It was very creative and I've never actually seen a poem like that before, I've seen the regular ones, but the way you 'cheated' made it more unique and interesting.
15Annabelle BlackI really like this! It was very creative and I've never actually seen a poem like that before, I've seen the regular ones, but the way you 'cheated' made it more unique and interesting.
12/31/2008 c1 3mylittlefirefly
Hey there again! :) Been quite a while, huh? This poem is wonderful. As I was reading this, I was wondering if the assignment pertained to the book, Night by Elie Wiesel. (I had to read this for english class over the summer as well). And I also had to fill out an AP "short" form (so not short, for 3 books I ended up typing over 5 pages, single-spaced. What are the teachers doing..getting kids hopes up like that? short my... xD). One of the criteria I had to write was my favorite part of the book. Mine's (is there such word?) is found of page 86:
"He [Eliezer’s dad] stared all around him ... to find out exactly where he was, in what place, and why. Then he smiled. I shall always remember that smile. ... The snow continued to fall in thick flakes over the corpses. "
This part almost made me want to cry. The things these Holocaust prisoners went through..it's devastating and heartbreaking.
Anyways, I thought this poem was successful and pointed out one of the central themes of Night: togetherness even in the face of death and despair.
Good job! ..And thanks for reading all this if you did. -mit :)
3mylittlefireflyHey there again! :) Been quite a while, huh? This poem is wonderful. As I was reading this, I was wondering if the assignment pertained to the book, Night by Elie Wiesel. (I had to read this for english class over the summer as well). And I also had to fill out an AP "short" form (so not short, for 3 books I ended up typing over 5 pages, single-spaced. What are the teachers doing..getting kids hopes up like that? short my... xD). One of the criteria I had to write was my favorite part of the book. Mine's (is there such word?) is found of page 86:
"He [Eliezer’s dad] stared all around him ... to find out exactly where he was, in what place, and why. Then he smiled. I shall always remember that smile. ... The snow continued to fall in thick flakes over the corpses. "
This part almost made me want to cry. The things these Holocaust prisoners went through..it's devastating and heartbreaking.
Anyways, I thought this poem was successful and pointed out one of the central themes of Night: togetherness even in the face of death and despair.
Good job! ..And thanks for reading all this if you did. -mit :)
12/30/2008 c1 24Soen22
I loved this, it was really cool. I liked how you 'cheated' because it makes it different. This actually might have made my personal favorite poems list along with the brilliant poem "When I Think About Myself" by Maya Angelon (I think that's how you spell her last name) Yeah. Anyways, I wish I were in S.E.A.R.C.H that'd be nice. But of course since I already go to a nerd school that has nothing but the 'gifted' in it that's out of the question. Yeah, I'm in all honors. Oh, by the way I found this amusing. My mother's friend's daughter went to a meet and greet at my school for open enrollment kids and it was right before the opening night of the middle school play I was in. So, she asked my mom "So, is it all drama kids?" and I found that highly amusing because almost no one is a drama kid. Well, actually never mind, there are a lot. Because our theatre teacher is cool. That's actaully not that amusing. Hmm, oh dear, I got off topic again.
-Emmi
24Soen22I loved this, it was really cool. I liked how you 'cheated' because it makes it different. This actually might have made my personal favorite poems list along with the brilliant poem "When I Think About Myself" by Maya Angelon (I think that's how you spell her last name) Yeah. Anyways, I wish I were in S.E.A.R.C.H that'd be nice. But of course since I already go to a nerd school that has nothing but the 'gifted' in it that's out of the question. Yeah, I'm in all honors. Oh, by the way I found this amusing. My mother's friend's daughter went to a meet and greet at my school for open enrollment kids and it was right before the opening night of the middle school play I was in. So, she asked my mom "So, is it all drama kids?" and I found that highly amusing because almost no one is a drama kid. Well, actually never mind, there are a lot. Because our theatre teacher is cool. That's actaully not that amusing. Hmm, oh dear, I got off topic again.
-Emmi
12/30/2008 c1 13missboo13
I like how simple this is. It also matches the book Night perfectly, I think. I also like the way you formatted it. Well done.
-Miss Boo
13missboo13I like how simple this is. It also matches the book Night perfectly, I think. I also like the way you formatted it. Well done.
-Miss Boo
12/20/2008 c1 maryallen
heheheheh... funny... it did look like a stamp. lol
MERRY X-MAS!
heheheheh... funny... it did look like a stamp. lol
MERRY X-MAS!