for the Artists10/26/2012 c1 Bookworm67
I think I just died. Oh my goodness this was so cute. Ugh I can't even begin to describe how I feel right now. Wow. But her friend seems like a bitch.
I think I just died. Oh my goodness this was so cute. Ugh I can't even begin to describe how I feel right now. Wow. But her friend seems like a bitch.
4/2/2009 c1 maya
"I don’t like him, I love him."
That line is so awesome to me for some reason, lol.
"I don’t like him, I love him."
That line is so awesome to me for some reason, lol.
1/16/2009 c1 
2CrossMyHeart
i scared myself laughing evil at the end of this. or maybe it was manically. Either way i scared myself. Good story! its cute! and after the confusion in the PM i just had to come back and read it. Yay!
I am really tired right now. and its 9. on a Friday. i suck.
XxCrossMyHeartxX
Gaspard loves me more. Just sayin'.
2CrossMyHearti scared myself laughing evil at the end of this. or maybe it was manically. Either way i scared myself. Good story! its cute! and after the confusion in the PM i just had to come back and read it. Yay!
I am really tired right now. and its 9. on a Friday. i suck.
XxCrossMyHeartxX
Gaspard loves me more. Just sayin'.
1/4/2009 c1 michelle
It's so sweet...*sniff*. I actually think I'm tearing up a tiny bit. then again, i am a romantic.
Eric, hmm?
It's good! I'm glad that the first time, he didn't recognize her. It would have been too cliche, if he had.
It's funny that he remembered the dime- i like that.
There are a few grammar issues, but i don't want to write them all out here. If you want me to do grammar checks on your stories, tell me, but otherwise just ignore me. :) I notice these things, sorry.
You really are romantic, too. :) You seem to take crushes seriously.
me=jealous, haha.
It's so sweet...*sniff*. I actually think I'm tearing up a tiny bit. then again, i am a romantic.
Eric, hmm?
It's good! I'm glad that the first time, he didn't recognize her. It would have been too cliche, if he had.
It's funny that he remembered the dime- i like that.
There are a few grammar issues, but i don't want to write them all out here. If you want me to do grammar checks on your stories, tell me, but otherwise just ignore me. :) I notice these things, sorry.
You really are romantic, too. :) You seem to take crushes seriously.
me=jealous, haha.
1/3/2009 c1 Chancee
Very well done. I like the whole one liner thing. You pulled it off well, but looking at your bio you got some experience under you. I wish this was not a one-shot but none the less it is not like a cliffhanger. I'm glad I read it and now on to another one of your pieces. Good Job!
Very well done. I like the whole one liner thing. You pulled it off well, but looking at your bio you got some experience under you. I wish this was not a one-shot but none the less it is not like a cliffhanger. I'm glad I read it and now on to another one of your pieces. Good Job!
1/1/2009 c1 5I Murder on Impulse
aw...I should feel sorry for the best friend but shes a bitch XD
xx
Great story!
5I Murder on Impulseaw...I should feel sorry for the best friend but shes a bitch XD
xx
Great story!
12/22/2008 c1 misery sister
I'm a bit confused with the ending, he fell in love with his art? Either way, it's fantastic story, and your writing is rather flawless. XD It's nice to come by a good story when it seems like every other story is mindless and poorly written.
Good luck in your future writings!
I'm a bit confused with the ending, he fell in love with his art? Either way, it's fantastic story, and your writing is rather flawless. XD It's nice to come by a good story when it seems like every other story is mindless and poorly written.
Good luck in your future writings!
12/15/2008 c1 1windyday
It's lovely. :). You captured the whole bittersweetness very well. I wonder about her friend though. But I guess she doesn't matter anyway. :).
1windydayIt's lovely. :). You captured the whole bittersweetness very well. I wonder about her friend though. But I guess she doesn't matter anyway. :).
12/11/2008 c1 8Song Six
OH MY GOD!
That was incredibly sweet and such a I guess...DREAM that I think even I would for. The serendipity of the story was so...wow.
I really love your writing style!
The main character, she seems to represent all the girls who stay infatuated with a boy they've known and then fall for them deep spending day by day wishing to see them again.
This was wonderful. It's the life story of many girls with their wishful happy ending. This was really wodnerful.
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing!
8Song SixOH MY GOD!
That was incredibly sweet and such a I guess...DREAM that I think even I would for. The serendipity of the story was so...wow.
I really love your writing style!
The main character, she seems to represent all the girls who stay infatuated with a boy they've known and then fall for them deep spending day by day wishing to see them again.
This was wonderful. It's the life story of many girls with their wishful happy ending. This was really wodnerful.
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing!
12/10/2008 c1 Rea
what did he first fall in lov e with too?
Fantastic story1
what did he first fall in lov e with too?
Fantastic story1
12/9/2008 c1 Hi there
"That’s what I first fell in love with, too." You mean he fell in love with his art too?
Anyway, nice story :).
"That’s what I first fell in love with, too." You mean he fell in love with his art too?
Anyway, nice story :).
12/9/2008 c1 18found.eventually
It seemed a wee-bit rushed towards the end, but other than that, I loved it. There's just this thing about your writing style that attracts me. Wonderful, darl. :)
18found.eventuallyIt seemed a wee-bit rushed towards the end, but other than that, I loved it. There's just this thing about your writing style that attracts me. Wonderful, darl. :)
12/9/2008 c1 19toffeecakesxox
Aw, it was so sad at first, and now the ending is perfect! Take that, Nameless Friend! Take that! Nyeh! I sound so freakishly childish right now. XD
-toffeecakesxox.
19toffeecakesxoxAw, it was so sad at first, and now the ending is perfect! Take that, Nameless Friend! Take that! Nyeh! I sound so freakishly childish right now. XD
-toffeecakesxox.
12/9/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
Cute but damn, her poor friend. It's a little too neat and tidy (I wish we could've gotten more of a sense of guilt, even if she liked him longer), but good oneshot. (: A few grammar mistakes was all. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnCute but damn, her poor friend. It's a little too neat and tidy (I wish we could've gotten more of a sense of guilt, even if she liked him longer), but good oneshot. (: A few grammar mistakes was all. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (: