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12/30/2008 c1 13blurrylights
Huh. Well..this was different.

I've read the other reviews you've gotten, and I'm sorry, but mine's going to be slightly different..

It was definitely well written, but I thought it was really overdone. I mean, it was just so much! All those metaphors and all that personification is good in increments, but this was just piling it on.

"Exposed and open on that desolate field, without a future, without a legacy, the plants stood, condemned to a bleak and hopeless eternity."

Melodrama much?

Sorry. Kind of critical, but I couldn't lie. It would appeal to some people (your other reviewers), but it didn't exactly click for me.
12/24/2008 c1 OhKay
I think you have a talent for depicting scenes amazingly even if you don't think so yourself.

I also liked the way this story flowed and I sorta saw what you meant by how you were trying to write a bit of horror into it? I don't think it fails... you probably just need to write about another subject :)

Keep it up
12/2/2008 c1 2pllx
I loved it. I expected something different, but this was better.

I must admit, I have a soft spot for writing involving plants.

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