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4/17/2011 c1 asklefjaeihog
I like it ;)
1/28/2009 c1 5envy me
First off, let me say you have talent. Some people who post stories don't have that gift. I don't know if I do or not but from this short piece I can see you do. You're vivid descriptions are exceptional! I love the paragraph that started with "Now that wasn't so bad, was it?" Great description there. And the surprise (which I'm not sure that you meant to do or not) that it was a girl murdering her best friend was nice. Good job. I'm totally lost as to why she's doing it. I want to read more.

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12/6/2008 c1 Monica
whoa...that was awesome

your writing has really developed

i loved it

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