1/7/2009 c28 3writing-addict77
I like this story. All the twists and turns it took...very nice. Can't wait for the next one from you!
I like this story. All the twists and turns it took...very nice. Can't wait for the next one from you!
1/7/2009 c23 writing-addict77
Ok, so I seriously just said, "What the hell?" when Charles was alive. The man is frickin' awesome! And he's a cat, I know he is.
I can't wait to read more!
Ok, so I seriously just said, "What the hell?" when Charles was alive. The man is frickin' awesome! And he's a cat, I know he is.
I can't wait to read more!
12/20/2008 c22 writing-addict77
They...killed...Charles...but he was so cool! AH! (tear)
I hope part three comes soon...I can't wait!
They...killed...Charles...but he was so cool! AH! (tear)
I hope part three comes soon...I can't wait!
12/19/2008 c21 writing-addict77
The guard Dorian makes me think of The Portrait of dorian Gray that I just read...cool book.
Love this story, just so ya know.
The guard Dorian makes me think of The Portrait of dorian Gray that I just read...cool book.
Love this story, just so ya know.
12/19/2008 c18 writing-addict77
But...but...Madeline can't betray them. Her and Joseph were in love...but she tricked him, didn't she? God! She was so cool! Curious about her past now.
But...but...Madeline can't betray them. Her and Joseph were in love...but she tricked him, didn't she? God! She was so cool! Curious about her past now.
12/19/2008 c17 writing-addict77
Will we see the gods again? They would be useful in battle against France. Like the dead in Lord of the Rings!
I like Merkon, he's cool (did I say that already?).
Will we see the gods again? They would be useful in battle against France. Like the dead in Lord of the Rings!
I like Merkon, he's cool (did I say that already?).
12/19/2008 c16 writing-addict77
Did you know that in ancient mythology the gods often tried- and sometimes succeeded-killed their people because they were not pleased with how the people acted? Yay for psychotic mythology!
Anyway, cool chapter. Gonna keep going.
Did you know that in ancient mythology the gods often tried- and sometimes succeeded-killed their people because they were not pleased with how the people acted? Yay for psychotic mythology!
Anyway, cool chapter. Gonna keep going.
12/14/2008 c15 writing-addict77
Love it! I like Merkon, but something about him makes me not want to trust him...I don't know what though. Hm...
Oh well, hope you update soon!
Love it! I like Merkon, but something about him makes me not want to trust him...I don't know what though. Hm...
Oh well, hope you update soon!
12/10/2008 c13 writing-addict77
Yay! I love them all! I liked the priestess too, even thought she was barely in it. She seems like she could kick butt.
Can't wait for part two! How many parts will there be?
Yay! I love them all! I liked the priestess too, even thought she was barely in it. She seems like she could kick butt.
Can't wait for part two! How many parts will there be?
12/10/2008 c12 writing-addict77
Ok the candle part reminded me of the Star Trek Next Generation episode where Crusher's grandma dies and she meets this guy who's relly a spirit thing that only exists because of the light that's burning.
Is all of this happening inside the volcano? I'm kinda confused, but I like it. I like that Madeline can fight. She's awesome.
Ok the candle part reminded me of the Star Trek Next Generation episode where Crusher's grandma dies and she meets this guy who's relly a spirit thing that only exists because of the light that's burning.
Is all of this happening inside the volcano? I'm kinda confused, but I like it. I like that Madeline can fight. She's awesome.
12/10/2008 c8 writing-addict77
I'm with Charles on this one. Joseph is being foolish. He'll come around though, I know it.
I love Basil. He seems like he is usually always happy, but because his daughter is gone, he is sad. Poor Basil.
I'm with Charles on this one. Joseph is being foolish. He'll come around though, I know it.
I love Basil. He seems like he is usually always happy, but because his daughter is gone, he is sad. Poor Basil.
12/10/2008 c6 writing-addict77
Holy crap Jean-Pierre died. I liked him. Oh well, Sir Joseph is alive and so is his love! Now can we find out who the guy is?
Holy crap Jean-Pierre died. I liked him. Oh well, Sir Joseph is alive and so is his love! Now can we find out who the guy is?
12/6/2008 c5 writing-addict77
Aw, Joseph's in love. Cool. Maybe the mystery man will be revealed soon...I like the humor he had.
Can't wait for another update!
Aw, Joseph's in love. Cool. Maybe the mystery man will be revealed soon...I like the humor he had.
Can't wait for another update!