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6/20/2011 c6 Rainsoaked Archangel
This story has the sweet, blossoming warmth of a slow, radiant smile. You paint so well with words, I can taste the sunshine. You have such a gift; never let it fade away.
7/26/2009 c10 26Melladonna
It's alright if you took a while. This chapter was definitely worth the read. Also, I'm behind and it took me a while to get around to reading this. I have a million and one projects on my plate so I've been busy.

I really liked the scene where they began to make out, everything was so visual and poetic. I'm definitely awaiting your next update!
2/3/2009 c9 Melladonna
That was a very good chapter, just as good as all the others. I like your mood setting and description of the background as well as Yuki's feelings. This story is always such a pleasing read. I can't wait until you update again, even though you just did, lol.

Good luck in all you do!
1/26/2009 c8 Melissa Norvell
I was too lazy to sign in, but hey, when you update 3 stories in one day and sign in three times, it gets tiring typing in stupid captcha words. @

I think my brain is burnt out from writing and I still have more updates this week. The weather is also horrible here and I got to come home from work early (good for my day, bad for my wallet
1/26/2009 c8 11eStHeR-tHe-ScRiBe
KYAA! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEE REVEAL YUKI-CHAN'S GENDER! I CAN BEAR IT NO LONGER! I lvoed the story so much too! This and another story that I absolutle yadore (Undeniably Sexy) are my two favoritist storiez!

Keep going sweetie!

Love, esther
1/25/2009 c7 26Melladonna
A very bitter-sweet chapter. I liked the portion where the two were discussing their pasts and I'm glad that Yuki finally got the nerve up to confront the past. I look forward to your next chapter and I hope that you'll check out some of my works.

See you next update!
1/25/2009 c6 Melladonna
Hm, I'm a vampire enthusiast so I might be interested. However, you should post them because you want to and you have a passion for writing, not because your public wants you to.

I've done a large amount of research on vampires and seeing another person's views that aren't based on horror-stoy type vampires will be good for me.

On to this chapter. It's very cute and I love the interaction of both of the characters. This is a very charming story and I look forward to reading more. I'm just a little sad that the next chapter will be my last until you update again.

I'm very into this.
1/25/2009 c5 Melladonna
Lol, Suzushima is quite the character, isn't he? I find myself liking him more and more with each chapter. Yuki did a good thing by keeping him in sights. (That was hard to write with nondescrptive gender floating about. I envision Yuki as a boy, the character's way of thinking and pattern of speech feels more like a man's then a woman's) I also took your poll. X3
1/25/2009 c4 Melladonna
I really like the emotion that you put into each chapter and I definitely look forward to further emotional exploits of Yuki's character. It's very easy to identify with the character's POV and you do a good job at making even the most simple things in life have meaning.

I'm glad that I decided to read this work. It's definitely worth the read and I am not dissapointed.
1/25/2009 c3 Melladonna
What a touching chapter. I really liked the scene with the daffodils. Suzushima was right, roses are a little cliche', aren't they?

Hopefully, I can get all of these chapters out of my way before you update. That's what I'm planning on anyway. I wished that I could have read this when you were first posting chapters. I have so many stories that I work on that it's hard to find time to read so many chapters but I try my best.

I'm only behind on two stories so far, lol. Hopefully one after this one and it's only by three chapters.
1/25/2009 c2 Melladonna
Suzushima and I actually have a lot of the same outlooks on life. Lol, who knew a guy could remind me so much of myself.

This is very interesting and I really hope that Suzushima can somehow keep Yuki from dying. Forgetting about the pills is definitely a start, if only for one night.
1/23/2009 c7 1King Echo
=D For some reason, I don't think Yuki will try to commit suicide anymore... XD Aw, I love Suzushima! He's such an awesome person. :D The world needs more happy and nice people like him~!

Lovely story, Miss Moonchild10! :D Update, soon, please?
1/22/2009 c7 11eStHeR-tHe-ScRiBe
*cries* IT WAS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL! I loveed it! Please keep writing! .
1/22/2009 c1 26Melladonna
I've always wanted to read this story beause it sounded like a very good one to me. I've passed it so many times updating my own works and now I'm finally getting around to reading it, which makes me happy because even after this chapter, I like it already.

Yuki's character is probably going to be my favorite. Nothing like the angsty, grumpy characters (though I think he was just mad beause his plans for suicide had been deterred). I've always had a soft spot for the more rugged characters.

A note on Tokyo dialect- Atsushi could still be considered a foreigner because the Tokyo dialect is the most commonly spoken in Japan and the first dialect they teach you when learning to speak Japanese, so it's very possible that he could be from another country. Just a random and interesting fact you may or may not know.

I'll definitely read more of this story later. I'm at work and I don't want to exceed my break.

If you wish or have the time, feel free to check out some of my works, you may like them.

See you again!

~Melissa~
1/15/2009 c1 11eStHeR-tHe-ScRiBe
WAIT! HOLY GOD! I DON'T KNOW IF YUKI'S A BOY! *omg*
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