for The Inexplicable State of Being There8/5/2014 c8 
13Yabu
I'm really enjoying this story! Your writing style is gripping and very easy to relate to - can't wait to keep reading! :D
P.S. One thing, maybe i'm being stupid but, what does 'oy vey' mean?
13YabuI'm really enjoying this story! Your writing style is gripping and very easy to relate to - can't wait to keep reading! :D
P.S. One thing, maybe i'm being stupid but, what does 'oy vey' mean?
8/4/2014 c20 ajashire1
I can't top a 1,000 views so if you're going to understand any of my feelings toward your story you best understand this: I read this book like I was watching a movie and you better damn well appreciate it. Thanks sweetheart. :3
I can't top a 1,000 views so if you're going to understand any of my feelings toward your story you best understand this: I read this book like I was watching a movie and you better damn well appreciate it. Thanks sweetheart. :3
7/18/2014 c20 flanerie
That was ADORABLE. I feel like the personalities of the characters, particularly Brody and Felicia, developed with each chapter as well. The writing just kept getting better and better. I had some issues with the mildly racist comments, and I found that whilst there was nothing homophobic about the story, some of the reactions to the sexuality of characters was a bit off-putting. Nevertheless, brilliantly written, adorable plot. Nice slow build, as opposed to insta-love.
That was ADORABLE. I feel like the personalities of the characters, particularly Brody and Felicia, developed with each chapter as well. The writing just kept getting better and better. I had some issues with the mildly racist comments, and I found that whilst there was nothing homophobic about the story, some of the reactions to the sexuality of characters was a bit off-putting. Nevertheless, brilliantly written, adorable plot. Nice slow build, as opposed to insta-love.
1/26/2014 c20 badbart
My only purpose for reviewing is to feed the review whore, not because I thoroughly enjoyed the story, nor because it make me laugh too much or anything else.
Great job!
My only purpose for reviewing is to feed the review whore, not because I thoroughly enjoyed the story, nor because it make me laugh too much or anything else.
Great job!
12/30/2013 c20 mimster259
How do you review something that's been reviewed over 1,000 other times?! You could say that you throughly enjoyed it, but that's probably been said at least 700 other times. You could go on and on about how much if an amazing writer you are, but that's also a very cliched review. So I'm just going to say that, you can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece of literature, much like Brody's artwork, and I'm going to read every other story you ever wrote on this site.
How do you review something that's been reviewed over 1,000 other times?! You could say that you throughly enjoyed it, but that's probably been said at least 700 other times. You could go on and on about how much if an amazing writer you are, but that's also a very cliched review. So I'm just going to say that, you can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece of literature, much like Brody's artwork, and I'm going to read every other story you ever wrote on this site.
11/28/2013 c7 daisukiklove
I Love how the story is so easy to read and on-the-edge, like there are some really good fictions out there, but it's kinda hard for me to keep reading continously(If u know why I mean) really good
I Love how the story is so easy to read and on-the-edge, like there are some really good fictions out there, but it's kinda hard for me to keep reading continously(If u know why I mean) really good
11/28/2013 c4 daisukiklove
I can't read the Spanish. Can your do like a translation on the side? Well srry if I can only read English, Vietnamese, Japanese, & like 10 words in Korean... Wish I took spanish
I can't read the Spanish. Can your do like a translation on the side? Well srry if I can only read English, Vietnamese, Japanese, & like 10 words in Korean... Wish I took spanish
11/11/2013 c20 Guest
luv it hun 3
luv it hun 3
10/1/2013 c20 11SunnySideUp26
WOW! I am soooo glad I found this story! It is truly amazing, and you're such a great writer. I loved everything about this story, and I was sad when it ended. Wonderful work :)
11SunnySideUp26WOW! I am soooo glad I found this story! It is truly amazing, and you're such a great writer. I loved everything about this story, and I was sad when it ended. Wonderful work :)
9/10/2013 c13 AlwaysThere
I love that last line! " You look at her like a masterpiece, like she's priceless to you." Awwwww :)
I love that last line! " You look at her like a masterpiece, like she's priceless to you." Awwwww :)
8/21/2013 c1 1SecondsTillWakingHour
Interesting story line so far, I have no idea what is going to happen and I like that.
1SecondsTillWakingHourInteresting story line so far, I have no idea what is going to happen and I like that.
7/23/2013 c20 2Marguerite Grimmett
Wow... Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters, but I couldn't wait to get to the next one. :) this story was AWESOME! I love how you portrayed the emotions, and the fact that Felicia and Brody both didn't really realize that the two were in love with each other. Also, adding Brody as an artist makes him more interesting, not to mention a bit more words for the competition. Haha. I also really love Felicia's little odd obsessions, like kiwi, and it adds a touch of humor because everyone thinks it's so strange. Also, Micki's such an interesting character... Too bad she and Nick didn't get together. Br anyway, this is a great story, love it!
2Marguerite GrimmettWow... Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters, but I couldn't wait to get to the next one. :) this story was AWESOME! I love how you portrayed the emotions, and the fact that Felicia and Brody both didn't really realize that the two were in love with each other. Also, adding Brody as an artist makes him more interesting, not to mention a bit more words for the competition. Haha. I also really love Felicia's little odd obsessions, like kiwi, and it adds a touch of humor because everyone thinks it's so strange. Also, Micki's such an interesting character... Too bad she and Nick didn't get together. Br anyway, this is a great story, love it!