
9/13/2010 c1 truthisalie
I told you that I hated you.
You said that you'd come back.
And secretly I hoped that I'd been the only one lying.
wow , this was beautiful .
I told you that I hated you.
You said that you'd come back.
And secretly I hoped that I'd been the only one lying.
wow , this was beautiful .
12/6/2008 c1
32watercolor smile
Aww, this was so sweet. Not the conventional Fictionpress love poem. I absolutely loved the little details like the purple sneakers and the crooked smile and the counting of the days. And it was a great touch how he returned at the end.

Aww, this was so sweet. Not the conventional Fictionpress love poem. I absolutely loved the little details like the purple sneakers and the crooked smile and the counting of the days. And it was a great touch how he returned at the end.
12/6/2008 c1 PixieTears
A little warnign this review is going to be sappy, sorry just too emotional to write anything worth an ounce of non sappiness. It made me cry, i love it, its so soo so so so so amazing, emotional, well written, and down right just sweet.
Nusi
PS sry about sappinessnessnessnessness
A little warnign this review is going to be sappy, sorry just too emotional to write anything worth an ounce of non sappiness. It made me cry, i love it, its so soo so so so so amazing, emotional, well written, and down right just sweet.
Nusi
PS sry about sappinessnessnessnessness