for Hello Stranger1/13/2009 c1 
613DiaRose
This is really interesting, though definitely not your best work. You're capable of conveying a lot of emotion that we don't see here. What we do see here is something interesting and well written but not as touching as it could be. Keep up the good work
Love,
~Dia
613DiaRoseThis is really interesting, though definitely not your best work. You're capable of conveying a lot of emotion that we don't see here. What we do see here is something interesting and well written but not as touching as it could be. Keep up the good work
Love,
~Dia
12/7/2008 c1 19Twyla Cole
I loved it. A little haunting. I expected some form of what the ending would be but it's still made my stomach turn. Very nicely done!
Truly,
Twyla Cole
19Twyla ColeI loved it. A little haunting. I expected some form of what the ending would be but it's still made my stomach turn. Very nicely done!
Truly,
Twyla Cole