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12/11/2008 c1 298Moon-Chaser
This is beautifully written, I love the progression of the poem. You write wonderfully and I can see in my mind where the poem takes me, very descriptive.

Keep it up.
12/9/2008 c1 Underworld.Acheron
I cant even imagine why anyone would do this for me... thank you so much Aly, you are an amazing person, a majestic writer, and the best friend a person could ever have.

To Aly

Once...

All was red

All was lead

All was dead

The birds never sang

The light never came

The world was never the same

My life was gone

My limbs were sawn

My love was a pawn

Heat returned to the barren wasteland,

Heat Revealed the life that was once covered in snow

Life was changed

Life was rearranged

Life was tamed

I felt alive

I needed no knife

I will survive...

This poem sucked ._. I'm sorry, nothing close to what was needed to be said, showing the pure happiness I actually feel... I don't know how to explain it, I owe you so much

Thanks Aly for all you've done
12/8/2008 c1 1crazyman12
WOW! *speechless* This poem was truly amazing. I love how you started off with the little boy sad and lost and alone, but then at the end he is found. Truly a great piece of writing.

Keep up the good work!

~Habs

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