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1/1/2009 c1 11thelasttears
people inschool used to sing that song... i ddont even know what its called or who its by... "i like girls who stop by for the summer the summer. i like gilrs who wear abercrombie and fitch" i hate that song with a fiery passion... you wont find and abercrombie andfitch in my closet

i love this... i beginning to see a patern in you work: its all really relatable and kind of fantastic!
12/12/2008 c1 21Tiernan Hunter
Gorgeous. Absolutely, stupendously, gorgeous.

The idea is beautiful, and the writing just brings it straight to life.

I really love it.
12/10/2008 c1 21MakeSarahSmile
Awh, this is really cute, and amazingly well-written! I love your poetry, keep writing please! :)
12/10/2008 c1 11crimson-reverie
man i know this sounds cliche, but i TOTALLY relate!

i like the 3rd stanza or paragraph or what ever you want to call it.

i hate relationships like that. it takes too much out of you.

good work as always, i'm eager to read new posted writings!
12/8/2008 c1 989East-0f-Eden
this is bittersweet for me. you can't have her anytime but the summer. you miss her the rest of the year. it's only the last stanza that throws me off. Are you saying you want her the rest of the year or are you saying you need a girl who sticks around all year long?

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