Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Held me Under

3/5/2009 c1 53Katie Nicole
I like this [:

I like that you use drowning in the water as a metaphor for drowning in love. The end is sad and somewhat unexpected, when you introduce someone other than you and your girlfriend.

_

Katie
2/16/2009 c1 21Antonella Marie
Hopefully your next girlfriend will treat you better than the previous one.
12/9/2008 c1 19Twyla Cole
hm...i really like the imagery...there is a little of that directness you were talking about. Im not sure how i feel about it yet. I'm still thinking, ha i guess i need to get back to you on this...

Truly,

Twyla

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service