
5/16/2012 c2 kolbyirish
I'm going to favorite this story anyways because I have hope that it will come back from the clutches of writer's block. The beginning is soooo great! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!1
I'm going to favorite this story anyways because I have hope that it will come back from the clutches of writer's block. The beginning is soooo great! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!1
5/16/2011 c2 oddreader
I'm in love with this story. Please, I beg of you PLEASE Continue.
you just don't understand how much i love this story.
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I'm in love with this story. Please, I beg of you PLEASE Continue.
you just don't understand how much i love this story.
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2/1/2010 c1
3namethegame
A really interesting beginning.
I can tell something good is going to come out of this.

A really interesting beginning.
I can tell something good is going to come out of this.
2/1/2010 c2 namethegame
It seems you have not updated in a while, but I do hope you get the chance to do so. This story has so much potential and I am only wondering what Mark has really done.
Great development in the story and the characters. I can see that I can learn a lot from your writing.
It seems you have not updated in a while, but I do hope you get the chance to do so. This story has so much potential and I am only wondering what Mark has really done.
Great development in the story and the characters. I can see that I can learn a lot from your writing.
9/22/2009 c2 Norma Porma Worma
omgee! why are you not updating? I don't care if I am am the only reviewer this story is too good to end! I need to find out what monique is going to do and what is mark's reaction please please please please please finish this story. when I am looking through my searches I find this story and read these 2 chapters over and over again. I am ready for more please,(I'm begging you!), please update and finish this story.
from a huge fan
-Norma Bu.
omgee! why are you not updating? I don't care if I am am the only reviewer this story is too good to end! I need to find out what monique is going to do and what is mark's reaction please please please please please finish this story. when I am looking through my searches I find this story and read these 2 chapters over and over again. I am ready for more please,(I'm begging you!), please update and finish this story.
from a huge fan
-Norma Bu.
9/21/2009 c2
5BlueAki
Whoa! Family drama. That's one crazy Christmas. I wonder if Mark really is cheating on Monique or if its all a big misunderstanding.

Whoa! Family drama. That's one crazy Christmas. I wonder if Mark really is cheating on Monique or if its all a big misunderstanding.
1/3/2009 c2 rainey
It has begun.
thanks for the update.
It has begun.
thanks for the update.
12/30/2008 c2 readergirl1
Worried about Monique. She seems like she's gonna crack any moment here.
Maybe Darcy needs to spend more time with her kids than at the mall. Just a thought.
Worried about Monique. She seems like she's gonna crack any moment here.
Maybe Darcy needs to spend more time with her kids than at the mall. Just a thought.