for It Hurts2/1/2010 c1 XxHuntressofArtemisxX
SO. FREAKING. TRUE.
awesome.
SO. FREAKING. TRUE.
awesome.
5/20/2009 c1 
1Pleasure Principle
wow this is good. i think you captured it PERFECTLY! i know this feeling! you captured that emotion really really well. nice job.
and it's nice to see another Bartimaeus Trilogy fan out there!
props. keep writing.
1Pleasure Principlewow this is good. i think you captured it PERFECTLY! i know this feeling! you captured that emotion really really well. nice job.
and it's nice to see another Bartimaeus Trilogy fan out there!
props. keep writing.
3/30/2009 c1 Cynically In Love
That's deep... really deep. One of the reasons why I don't wan to transfer schools next year, actually. The same thing is actually happening to me, too. It seems as if my two besties are drifting away from me as the day goes on...
This piece of writing is amazing, though it's depressing to know that this is a true story and not a work of fiction. And, don't worry... you made sense to me, so I'm thinking that you'll make sense to everyone else! :D
Keep on writing AND laugh every single day, even when you sad!
~ Love2ReadnWrite
That's deep... really deep. One of the reasons why I don't wan to transfer schools next year, actually. The same thing is actually happening to me, too. It seems as if my two besties are drifting away from me as the day goes on...
This piece of writing is amazing, though it's depressing to know that this is a true story and not a work of fiction. And, don't worry... you made sense to me, so I'm thinking that you'll make sense to everyone else! :D
Keep on writing AND laugh every single day, even when you sad!
~ Love2ReadnWrite
3/2/2009 c1 2Aaron K. Turner
you reviewed one of mine so i'm reviewing one of yours amazing well written and i've been in this situation before so i can relate
2Aaron K. Turneryou reviewed one of mine so i'm reviewing one of yours amazing well written and i've been in this situation before so i can relate
2/19/2009 c1 25UrFaveFreek
Not to be insensitive cuz this story wuz awesome but did she move or like die? I am confused. I really hope she didn't die cuz that would be so sad.
25UrFaveFreekNot to be insensitive cuz this story wuz awesome but did she move or like die? I am confused. I really hope she didn't die cuz that would be so sad.
1/20/2009 c1 64PotoPerson
Its almost like a poem or a song. You did a nice job I like it!
"It hurt when, one morning, she appeared you and said you would soon live next door her"
The sentence is sort of confusing. I think you may have forgotton a word in there.
"...each little grain searing my skin with an image of happieness..."
That e after the i isn't there.
Keep on writing!;D
64PotoPersonIts almost like a poem or a song. You did a nice job I like it!
"It hurt when, one morning, she appeared you and said you would soon live next door her"
The sentence is sort of confusing. I think you may have forgotton a word in there.
"...each little grain searing my skin with an image of happieness..."
That e after the i isn't there.
Keep on writing!;D
12/16/2008 c1 3MagicalSpork
Aww, so sad. Nicely written, though.
(Thanks for reviewing my story, by the way!)
3MagicalSporkAww, so sad. Nicely written, though.
(Thanks for reviewing my story, by the way!)